My summer room, c&c please

[iJoe]

Hey,

I started this room a long time ago and I think its finally finished

I think i have made a bit of a mistake putting the petals by the mats because it just seems weird ( i have now recycled the mats )

well anyway i am in need of c&c and i will +rep ALL constructive critism & commants :)

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/2867/summerroomvt0.png

Thanks :) Joe

[Jamesy]

its good, if not slightly random in some places.

[iJoe]

ye, i kinda just put the yukkas down.... thanks for comment +rep of i like your sig aswell ukrane dance

[alex 1889]

Hey,

I started this room a long time ago and I think its finally finished

I think i have made a bit of a mistake putting the petals by the mats because it just seems weird ( i have now recycled the mats )

well anyway i am in need of c&c and i will +rep ALL constructive critism & commants :)

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/2867/summerroomvt0.png

Thanks :) Joe
yellow icms not blue
the beach has holes in :p remove them
get rid of the yellow pillow and out a fan there.
sunset posters all over the far wall would look awesome imo
add a few more barrel stools next to the ones already there
yellow parsols only

7/10 seems like you were so desperate to post you forgot to add a few things :p

[iJoe]

thanks alot, i need loads of beach rubs :o and yellow parasols..... and another fan

hmm to the trade rooms lol, all my rares are in that room lol well most :)

[The Professor]

The gaps between the mats look poor. How many beaches do you know with puddles all over it? ;)

I dont see why the solariums are there, if theyre meant to be the sun... they really dont look like it ;) Maybe lots of solariums on top of each other would give a nice effect, but theyll just get switched off and you wont be able to switch it back on again, so it might be an idea not to bother ;)

Spread the seating out, its all to one side

More posters

etc etc ;) Nice try but not there yet

[le harry]

Lamps work well as suns!

[Mr.Sam]

stack loads of bball lamps they look like suns

[Nick-]

Why are there chairs in the ocean? :S
Most of the improvements have been covered, especially the gaps in the beach.
Perhaps you could section off the petal area as a beach hut or VIP area of some sort?

[Mr.Sam]

They are like inflatable chairs - like lilo's or w/e they are called
Why are there chairs in the ocean? :S
Most of the improvements have been covered, especially the gaps in the beach.
Perhaps you could section off the petal area as a beach hut or VIP area of some sort?

[Jordie]

the gold pillow is a bit random
i actually like the room alot well done:)

[Nick-]

Ah i see, dont really think they fit but thats just my opinion, i know theyre technically inflated and should fit with the room they dont really. If they were a different colour they would look a lot better as they look like they may be part of the ocean as they are, i understand thats not possible at the moment ;)

More different coloured fans would add a definite summer touch to the room as well, especially more of the green fans

[iJoe]

great thanks for all of the comments :d

i will definately add more rugs when i get credz, i dont think i could get lots of bb trophys quite like sun atm. inflatables are quite random but i think it just adds to the sea a bit, would look better of people were on them

i need more posters on that far wall, i'll get them asap and i'll spread out all of the stuff aswell

will probly take a while as i need to go and get credits or go and trade alot so give me about 2-3 weeks and i'll repost with the suggestions made

thanks again rep will be given shortly

Joe

edit: i gave you all rep saying thanks for the suggestions and comments ~ mersemusic

[Shawnstra]

Hey,

I started this room a long time ago and I think its finally finished

I think i have made a bit of a mistake putting the petals by the mats because it just seems weird ( i have now recycled the mats )

well anyway i am in need of c&c and i will +rep ALL constructive critism & commants :)

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/2867/summerroomvt0.png

Thanks :) Joe


Change ICMs into yellow, and put them somewhere else
Remove Gold Pillow
Overlap brown mats so there are no gaps
remove petals, they don't fit the beach theme of the room
remove green fan
Use a single yellow colour for parasols
Cover the whole sea area [doormats] with the lapland poster

[MrCorny]

Looks good 9/10 :)