KevSays
03-05-2005, 02:56 PM
This is my winning extract that I've copied from my English book..
This came 4th and it was a competition of creating mood.
I'm hoping this will improve my chance of becoming a Habbox Writer.
:
He really was a loner. No-one with sense would ever try to befriend him, and, judging by his actions I think he preferred it that way. His past was hardly acceptable but he still came to the old water creek occasionally.
To be honest, I didn't think much of him when he first arrived, but I was a little kid with no cares in the world but over the years, I got older and wiser. Now I know it's sensible to take precautions whenever he may pass by.
He is one-in-a-million; hardly in a good way though.
He had that true killer instinct about him..
Well, any good guys??
This came 4th and it was a competition of creating mood.
I'm hoping this will improve my chance of becoming a Habbox Writer.
:
He really was a loner. No-one with sense would ever try to befriend him, and, judging by his actions I think he preferred it that way. His past was hardly acceptable but he still came to the old water creek occasionally.
To be honest, I didn't think much of him when he first arrived, but I was a little kid with no cares in the world but over the years, I got older and wiser. Now I know it's sensible to take precautions whenever he may pass by.
He is one-in-a-million; hardly in a good way though.
He had that true killer instinct about him..
Well, any good guys??