Recolour of parasol

[anacanican]

please rate as a recolour and dont just rate, give constructive comments on how I can improve :D click here for it (http://img91.echo.cx/img91/5926/parasolrecolour1ii.gif)

[OxfordScholar]

Nice try. Needs more shading though mate - improve on that and it'll be good! :) 6/10 so far :)