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Rou
07-06-2007, 09:58 PM
posted in spam but figured i should post it here.
Sung by me and someone else from my band :]
Clicky to listen (http://www.uploadz.co.uk/173full_e7ac8cdb5bd7d33b927377de41dcdaf3.mp3)
Tell me what you think!
Jackk
07-06-2007, 10:04 PM
Liam is your voice supose to have an echo on it? The guitar is louder than your voice so you cant really hear you at the beggining, nice lyrics and voice ;)
Rou
07-06-2007, 10:08 PM
Liam is your voice supose to have an echo on it? The guitar is louder than your voice so you cant really hear you at the beggining, nice lyrics and voice ;)
I was hitting the guitar abit hard id say, when i do that my voice seems to get quiter instead of louder i realy gotta work on that. But thanks :D
Axel
07-06-2007, 10:16 PM
Like all of your songs you can hardly hear you Emora boy.
Rou
07-06-2007, 10:22 PM
Like all of your songs you can hardly hear you Emora boy.
i got an idea to make it louder next time :]
manga21
09-06-2007, 10:43 PM
The guitar is ok... Sorta sounds out of tune at the start, Dunno if its your guitar , But Its good seeing how hard it is to play and sing at the same time haha! Well I find it hard with my bass. But after the intro it seems to be slower. I think it could be improved I like the chords which I am guessing has the E and A strings but I arnt really keen on the high notes it does not seem right but I dunno, But it sounds really nice, It can be defo improved I know hard it is to write songs. btw the chorus and the bridge ;) Keep it up
Rou
10-06-2007, 12:45 AM
The guitar is ok... Sorta sounds out of tune at the start, Dunno if its your guitar , But Its good seeing how hard it is to play and sing at the same time haha! Well I find it hard with my bass. But after the intro it seems to be slower. I think it could be improved I like the chords which I am guessing has the E and A strings but I arnt really keen on the high notes it does not seem right but I dunno, But it sounds really nice, It can be defo improved I know hard it is to write songs. btw the chorus and the bridge ;) Keep it up
Ive got one half finshed so i should record it by tomorrow, from what ive got it seams alot better :] and cheers btw :D
manga21
10-06-2007, 11:04 AM
Ive got one half finshed so i should record it by tomorrow, from what ive got it seams alot better :] and cheers btw :D

Ok will be looking forward to be hearing it!

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