View Full Version : [Alteration] [Acid] Play Area Finished!
Pillsbury
08-06-2007, 10:55 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/8140/playareascene1nh8.png
JUZMI (Jeff) on the skateboard, Sami in her ferrari coat and hat with her bmx with ferrari stickers, Binxers and :HIC-UP: On the slide, 72Dpi with the spray can, Callout and Bryan on the monkey bars, Elle and 24 on the platform by the firemans poll, Duncan and Davey on the swings, LaCrookedCop watching, and Suir in the sand :) (Sorry if you dont kow the names theyre friends from HD)
PaulMacC
08-06-2007, 11:03 PM
10/10 that deserves elites
Did you do the Sand pit it looks awesome
Fall.
08-06-2007, 11:07 PM
Elites pls.
Pillsbury
08-06-2007, 11:11 PM
I used a sand patch and edited it into that if thats what you mean.
CrazyColaist
08-06-2007, 11:39 PM
elites bbz.
Ekalb
09-06-2007, 12:07 AM
shadows plz
Along with shadows try adding some interesting scenary and little bits and bobs like street signs, bins, rubbish, creepy old guy with a camera with a big zoom lense leaning over the fence at the back and maybe try brightening it up so it's more appealing.
Overall it's petty good.
Shawnstra
09-06-2007, 12:50 AM
Looks amazing. 9/10.
The floor is a little dull though, maybe add some colour?
Jamesy
09-06-2007, 07:35 AM
i agree with doomsboy, try making an asphalt texture then it would be brilliant, atho its very very good now
mousey
09-06-2007, 07:43 AM
Amazing, 10/10, i love the guy in the sand pit!
Pillsbury
09-06-2007, 11:06 AM
Ive put shadows in... if you mean around the play area stuff then ok... and yea Ill whack an old guy with a camera at the back :P Dont ban me! a friend said it needed texture and hed lend me one he made but he hasnt gotten back to me so Ill try and get that too.
EXCELLENT!! Looks fab. Someone put it in elites. I love the wood grain. Cant see anything wrong with it. If you want to improve it maybe give the floor some texture but thats all i can think of.
Well done +Rep if i can (think i repped you when you had just posted half of it)
Like i said before, love the slide!!
A Lil' Dodgy On The Rising Sand But Deserves Elites! 9.75/10 +Rep
Is it me or is there no shadow what so ever
NO SHADOW OMG HOW CAN NO SHADOW HAVE ELITES
--ss--
09-06-2007, 11:19 AM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/8140/playareascene1nh8.png
JUZMI (Jeff) on the skateboard, Sami in her ferrari coat and hat with her bmx with ferrari stickers, Binxers and :HIC-UP: On the slide, 72Dpi with the spray can, Callout and Bryan on the monkey bars, Elle and 24 on the platform by the firemans poll, Duncan and Davey on the swings, LaCrookedCop watching, and Suir in the sand :) (Sorry if you dont kow the names theyre friends from HD)
Looks good , elite ftw , maybe add someone that fell of and hurt them self?
I reconise most of the names in the list , they're all habbos from .com :p
oh yeah + rep :)
Pillsbury
09-06-2007, 11:32 AM
Thx ss and bef and everyone else -siz... Ive added a texture to the play area concrete... if you think I should Ill do the same for the pavement concrete thing too... and Im adding shadows now and Ill repost it in my next post.
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6610/playareascene1fb9.png
Jamesy
09-06-2007, 11:56 AM
I would go as far as saying Elites now... Add texture to paths yh, match up then
Pillsbury
09-06-2007, 12:06 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/15/playareascene1ml9.png
Im keeping the skatepark area smooth cos you cant skate on gravel lol.
MrCorny
09-06-2007, 12:08 PM
Thats great! 10/10 +rep
Ekalb
09-06-2007, 02:25 PM
Is it me or is there no shadow what so ever
NO SHADOW OMG HOW CAN NO SHADOW HAVE ELITES
It's you because there are actually a few shadows.
HAHAHA LOL I PWN U
Shadows still need work for those bigger surfaces.
tbh, thats very very good.
Elites maybe.. Also i want me in the alteration PMSL!
Jõnathan
09-06-2007, 02:39 PM
NO SHADOW OMG HOW CAN NO SHADOW HAVE ELITES
That makes no sense.
Plus your alts were well crap before.
On topich: This is a well good piece of work 11/10
Ekalb
09-06-2007, 02:45 PM
It's you because there are actually a few shadows.
HAHAHA LOL I PWN U
Shadows still need work for those bigger surfaces.
Here's a few of examples of what I mean from the original:
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/4152/acidsshadowsbq7.png
You might like to use a lighter tone of the shadow you already used for characters though. Whatever suits you best.
Pillsbury
09-06-2007, 03:11 PM
Argh lol nah thats good explaining. I just cba putting them under everything, specially stuff that isnt on the floor :(
Browney
09-06-2007, 03:58 PM
Here's a few of examples of what I mean from the original:
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/4152/acidsshadowsbq7.png
You might like to use a lighter tone of the shadow you already used for characters though. Whatever suits you best.
Follow this and I'll call for elites.
kyle♥
09-06-2007, 04:42 PM
Needs some shadows as Ekalb said.
Pillsbury
10-06-2007, 07:03 PM
Ok Ill add them then. Thx a lot everyone.
SimplyLiberty
10-06-2007, 07:20 PM
too basic for elites, looks decent, but you need to include shadows more, the bike looks good, about the only bit i would give u credit for, everything else is highly basic and most of it is actually just copied and just basic shaping and shading O.O
Far from elites, sorry, you need to concentrate more on the shading side of things also, sort that guys arms out [the one coming down the slide]
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