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strummerboy
13-06-2007, 07:27 PM
Well, almost empty. I'm very proud of the room and windows, however I think the content is a bit messy.
I can only improve!
I made the TV (Not the best standard) and I used a template for the man. So please enjoy my Empty Hotel Room.:)

Cool--
13-06-2007, 07:33 PM
Hello,

I can see your new to graphic designing, Its a good start but you can deff see your new as there alot of errors, You can only get better and im sure you will.
;)

strummerboy
13-06-2007, 07:34 PM
Thanks for the comment

Kardan
13-06-2007, 07:34 PM
Try and use a Habbo room template for the size of the furniture and make things isometric.
3/10.

SusieC
13-06-2007, 07:35 PM
The chair looks really small compared to the TV?
But overall, it looks really good. Well done. 7/10

strummerboy
13-06-2007, 07:37 PM
Thanks for the comments, please leave a rating out of 10 and finally: Where would I get a Habbo Room template without anything in it?

krimzen
13-06-2007, 07:39 PM
It made me smile, Thanks :) <3

@xP
13-06-2007, 07:39 PM
It's a very good attempt.

But there are alot of errors. You will get better.

its-me-sam
13-06-2007, 07:46 PM
good attemt keep em coming soon you be sehr gut ;]

Boonzeet
14-06-2007, 12:17 PM
good attemt keep em coming soon you be sehr gut ;]

Lol.... sam thats german? lol its ok but use this:

http://www.****************/uploads/613c5d0e8e.png (http://www.****************)

or:

http://www.****************/uploads/0254a45831.png (http://www.****************)

kk? These will make it look great

Chippiewill
22-06-2007, 08:05 PM
Your new (like me)

Couple of tips that i dont fully understand all

1) TV Isn't isometric
2) door is.. i'm not really sure
3) Dont save as Jpeg if you did
4) clouds dont look great same with skyscrapers
5)
Try and use a Habbo room template I Agree
+ Rep For Effort ;D

Meticulous
22-06-2007, 08:24 PM
It's very good compared to some that I've seen for a first.
And I'd also count it as an alt, As you've added a tv to the room.
It needs some work but it's really good.
7/10 :D
<3

4:20
22-06-2007, 09:15 PM
Tv isn't isometric, save as .png,And I don't like the colors.

4/10

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