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-:=:-scotty-:=:
18-06-2007, 08:40 PM
Hey Guys!!!

heres my 2nd ever layout... i know its a random topic but i wanted to design it on something! leave comments :)

http://www.unsignedpromotion.com/carsite/test.png

Ini
18-06-2007, 08:47 PM
Erm.. never seen your first so i can say your getting better or not.

The black borders are abit too thick
The emboss on the buttons is too thick
The banner is nice but don't like the text
Don't really like the gradient of the bottom bar.

Try black and a really dark grey and put the scale to 0.

I like that sort fo gradient

L!nK
18-06-2007, 09:01 PM
Iv got the idea of the design your trying to do, but don't use those sort of things.. like buttons etc.

Oni
18-06-2007, 09:10 PM
Yeh lower/remove the emboss, change the bottom bar so its not radial and its a slight gradient and theres a big white line around the car.

Bomb-Head
18-06-2007, 11:26 PM
I like it, I'm not too sure about the grey/silver box though.

Overall, I think it's good - +rep.

Puma
19-06-2007, 01:58 AM
well.. hmm kinda BLOGGY.. but well done

mousey
19-06-2007, 03:17 PM
reminads me fo my first layout XD, the box's are a bit to big. and the car could do with a bit of work.

:Edzy
19-06-2007, 03:24 PM
its not half bad, ease on the bevel and use the wand tool to remove car background next time, i'm assuming u used photoshop/fireworks?

redtom
19-06-2007, 04:08 PM
Whats going on with the car? You'r not suppost to keep the shadow of the car in the render you add that your-self once you've renderd it, also you need to touch up your rendering, I don't have time to comment on the layout it's self I've got to go.

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