An old poem

[PigsNose]

I don't know if I have posted this one before, I looked back and I don't think I did. I wrote this years and years ago when I had no muse, but still.
I hide under my duvet
I don’t come out
I can hear them shouting
But what about?

I can hear screaming and smashing
Plates being broken
Dads voice booming
Mum being choken

I cry myself to sleep
Afraid I'll be next
Mum comes to comfort
She does her best

I see her eyes are swollen
They look so bad
Blood runs down her face
I feel so sad

I hear dad rumble
He's near my door
But mum stops him
So he beats her to the floor

The ending doesn't seem right but I can't think of anything. Thanks, please comment.

[Misawa]

I don't know if I have posted this one before, I looked back and I don't think I did. I wrote this years and years ago when I had no muse, but still.
I hide under my duvet
I don’t come out
I can hear them shouting
But what about?

I can hear screaming and smashing
Plates being broken
Dads voice booming
Mum being choken

I cry myself to sleep
Afraid I'll be next
Mum comes to comfort
She does her best

I see her eyes are swollen
They look so bad
Blood runs down her face
I feel so sad

I hear dad rumble
He's near my door
But mum stops him
So he beats her to the floor

The ending doesn't seem right but I can't think of anything. Thanks, please comment.


Yeah, the ending is a little blunt. See if you can work on that a little. :)