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thegoodman25
28-06-2007, 09:02 PM
This is a an original design of a laptop which I produced in paint!

Please rate this out of 10!!!!! :eusa_danc

Meanies
28-06-2007, 09:13 PM
tbh; its quite poor. Sorry to be harsh but its true.
I'd give it a 4/10.

Try and make it 3d. You don't get completely flat laptops; add a bit of depth.
Also, the area with the keys is too small, and too far up. It needs to be bigger.
The keypad also needs to be a bit bigger and maybe add something on the screen? Make it more interesting.

SusieC
29-06-2007, 11:19 AM
It's pretty flat, esp. the keyboard
The colours are a bit bland too.
5/10.

Mr.Reddin
01-07-2007, 01:47 AM
I agree with them, sorry, and also the keyboard is a bit small, I'm using a laptop right now.

Soy
07-07-2007, 12:26 AM
Too flat not enough detail.

Only way you could improve it is by adding more material to the screen or making it wider

JoeyK.
09-07-2007, 10:29 AM
Not the best I've seen... 3/10.

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