[Bliss] Little Red Riding Hood.

[Blissa]

Ok, I made a Habbo Alteration of Little Red Riding Hood. The Basket was hard to get right, too big, too small, I was working for ages on it, lol. I've also added a famous catchphrase from the Fairy Tale and I'll soon be making the wolf in a bed in her grandma's clothes and making a whole scene, with the wood chopper and so on.. Anyway, rate it so far, constructive critisism is welcomed.



http://www.iaza.com/work/converted/redridinghood85202.gif

[H0BJ0B]

Wicked. Can't se anything wrong!

[dirrty]

looks gd, i like it and cant think of how to improve it :)

+rep

[kyle♥]

That's well good, you have some talent.
10/10 ;) +rep.

[beau03]

nice, but shes fat lawl

[Lycan]

looks good +rep

[Shawnstra]

That looks amazing :) 10/10 +rep Edit/needa spread :(

[Duck Hunt]

Things to improve: Make it so i can read what shes saying :( its probally just a screw up on the internet

Nice alt ;) its VERY good actually 9/10

[Fall.]

maybe the dress colours at the bottom?

[4:20]

That looks great :D

[Xihia]

lovely work

[Roboevil]

It's not too bad, I'm not as fond of it as others seem to be, parts of it are really good and it's a good sign to see that you're taking an attempt something hard like the dress. Most of it is pretty sound and it looks fine, however the dress has come out a little odd looking. The shading is all over the place and there's no defined contrast, I'm not accusing you of anything but it looks a little lazily done, or as if you'd tried a lot and given up. The basket though, I think came out pretty well, you said you'd had trouble making it look good and I think you pulled it off well. Apart from the dress, I think all-in-all, it's all pretty good.

[@xP]

Thats very very good.

Professional looks attractive, +rep

[Blissa]

Thanks for all comments, they're much appreciated :) I'll take your comments on-board for my next alteration Roboevil, so thanks for that. I did have a bit of trouble with the dress at first, but I tried to focus on the realistic creases that would be on a dress. So that's probably why it seems to look all over the place. But thanks for the comments again, and they're all taken into account.