Hirohito's Study Garden WIP

[Joemaphobe]

I've nearly finished my new room.
I know I need a few more things to finish it off.
for example 3 more Japanese boxes.

but other than the obvious could you point out wat I could improve..
be it layout or plants used.


im sorry that my print screen doesn't work.
so i would be greatful and offer +rep to the 1st person to post a screenie.

many thanks x

[Robby]

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Shot at 2007-07-11

[Jordie]

Pillows are two random
so take them out:)

nice effort though 8/10:)

[Shawnstra]

:o I like the way you make the sitting area. And yes as Jordie said remove the pillows.

[Joemaphobe]

okay thanks :]

[alex 1889]

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Shot at 2007-07-11
get rid of purple ppillows, other then that its very nice +rep

[The Professor]

Pillows are two random
so take them out:)

nice effort though 8/10:)

To be honest, I think thats a fairly harsh score given that you gave so few bad points.

I think the eating area might as well extend all the way, that little passage isnt doing a lot. The rainforest posters at the end of that path could be removed. Remove the pillows, and it's near perfect :)

[womanizer]

i like it, 8/10

[-Creative-]

cool room! very creative! :D keep it up

[Catzsy]

Pillows are two random
so take them out:)

nice effort though 8/10:)

Agree. Other than that a great effort. 8.5/10