first ever lwit out c&p :P

[GrebSkeb]

I did no copy and paste it was a 1o min job i will improve it but show you be for it is finished. plz rate out of 10
http://i16.tinypic.com/5zn7did.jpghttp://i15.tinypic.com/4pvm7t4.jpg

Edited by Elkaa (Forum Moderator): Picture updated at user request.

[Fall.]

the sign is horrible plers
some more shading could be used

kthxbi

[dbgtz]

Not bad, windows a bit small, sign is horrid and door is too small.
A bit more shading?
Other then that good.

[mousey]

Looks To tall, window to small, sign needs to be ismetric, other then that its good for a 1st

[GrebSkeb]

Ill improve it asap i prefer critiseing comment cuz then i can improve :P

[CrazyColaist]

Shading pl0x and sign is terrorble.

[GrebSkeb]

Imporved no sign, smaller, longer, bigger door i think and newer windows
http://i15.tinypic.com/61yi8fr.jpg just tempory windows

[CrazyColaist]

Oh Cool now were getting somewhere.

[luke-p]

Looks good, the windows dont look right thou, the frame should go the same way as the house.

[GrebSkeb]

In factthe newer vesion this is all done on MSpaint you know?
http://i9.tinypic.com/66ljoyx.jpg

[GrebSkeb]

here is the newwer pic :P
http://i15.tinypic.com/4pvm7t4.jpg

[=gamemaster=]

O nice! shadow is a bit big! and some transparentcy for background maybe some grass add some people in the windows etc??? maybe a path to doors??

[Mario]

im guessing you followed this tutorial: http://www.pixelfreak.com/en/tutorial3.html

[GrebSkeb]

Sort of :P it helpes

[Shawnstra]

The second one looks quite ok, the shadow is weird though.

[dannyisnotamazing]

It looks pretty good, the finished version anyhow. =]

[CrazyColaist]

Niiice 8/10

[GrebSkeb]

Not finished :P

[Jebbo]

6/10 :P :eusa_danc

[GrebSkeb]

ty jebbo it will be better soon im getting a new program like 2 pounds nd it is better than photoshop

[GrebSkeb]

im sorry bout double posting just need it to be show cu im getting no comments =[

[GrebSkeb]

tht is it still low 1st page for alt =[

[GrebSkeb]

agen sorry bout quadurpall posting :P but a even more i mean more improved version
http://i14.tinypic.com/6h39ztg.jpg

[GrebSkeb]

i hate it when no one replys =[

[GrebSkeb]

sorry bout hu know what posting :P but here is anufa update
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6981/hadhopuv0.png


Edited by Yoshimitsui (Super Moderator): Please don't multiple post.

[User43]

The shading on house is ok :) WD

[GrebSkeb]

ty i began a month ago and then i got ma pool out nd so i hadnt done more in a while i so i did

[=gamemaster=]

zookboy, I reckon the grass and path etc isnt yours, its in bitmap, and yours is sharper, so i reckon its not your sorry....


Hmm, Good so far, Some flowers dont look real soz.. Change the chimney! put the pipes centered in middle. not both facing you!

[GrebSkeb]

ty for advise and the grass and the path is mine

[Shinigami]

Dont save as JPEG and dont double, triple etc. post just to say 'more comment'; you dont get comments at a click of a finger. (Or should I say click of a mouse?) Anyway, it's good for a first. Next time try not to follow a tutorial word for word, although I like how you incorporated what others have suggested :)

[GrebSkeb]

ty ill try not double triple quadruple post :P

[VPSwow]

Keep trying and fgs please stop keep posting just because noone replies.