My first themed room.

[Astrayed]

Okay so this is my room.

http://uploadpicz.com/images/QSF9VS2.png (http://uploadpicz.com)

Please rate it and tell me what I could do to improve it.

[VPSwow]

Hmm it looks kinda cramped.

[lDuckFunk]

Random Things, Not a V. Good layout, Try re-arranging the hcs

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[Meanies]

I dont particularly like it.
I like the idea of having the diving board.
But coins and a plant in a swimming pool? Not seen that before. neither have i seen a hot tub inside a pool.
The blue amber lamp looks really random, as does the red smoke under the parasol, also the green parasol does.
The list could go on ;P

Alot of the things have just been placed randomly, as duckfunk said.

[Shawnstra]

Okay so this is my room.

http://uploadpicz.com/images/QSF9VS2.png (http://uploadpicz.com)

Please rate it and tell me what I could do to improve it.

Looks a bit random imo. Remove the red rollers, it doesn't fit.

[=gamemaster=]

Hmm, Quite nice stacking, if you would like me to help improve (Im a very good stacker) Feel free!

[Astrayed]

http://uploadpicz.com/images/EU94DBE.png (http://uploadpicz.com)

Iv'e changed it slightly.

[Swinkid]

not bad but what is the point of the coins? and you could of made a small island xD

[The Professor]

A couple of golden rules when making a room:

Floating furniture 99% of the time looks poor. Its better to stack on top of things.
Furniture that "overlaps" also looks poor, in reference to the palm tree chair "overlapping" the mode bar.
While using furniture from different ranges can sometimes be impressive, more often than not it just looks like you've gone through a storage room and picked out anything.
Pick your furniture carefully. Ive never seen green chairs, especially sofas, on a beach ;)

Theres enough there to be working with i think.

[5,5]

I don't particually like it very much, 5/10.

[Astrayed]

The sofas ae currently a subsitue untill summer furniture comes. The coins represcent lost treasure. I don't think would get a island in their lol. Also Alex can you point out the furniture misouts as that can and cannot apply to all of it and i'm looking for key features.

[Astrayed]

http://uploadpicz.com/images/CVLH3US.png (http://uploadpicz.com)

After tweaking and buying that is the room now.

[iNicks]

Here is what I think is wrong with it.

Blue amber random..?
Why is lodge bars not the same line?
Traffic light on a beach?
CDs under the diving board? :S
Is that green parasol in a tree..?
I know my pool doesn't have ducks in it..
Parasols are all randomly placed in the wrong places.
HC's dont really go with the colors.
Yea sometimes theres money in pools, but doesnt go well.

But it is better than last version.