My Big Habbo

[Cryings]

http://i12.tinypic.com/4raeqaa.png

It's my first
rate/slate

[Jackk]

the face looks weird.

[Cryings]

changed the face a bit.

[Laura<3]

you aint got it quite right
all the black lines have to be connected
at the ends of them so they dont overlap and become 2 (well in some small bits they do - but thats not that often)
you dont have gaps between them where they meet
the line has to be continuos

&aswell as that, you need to do that shading of it inside, you have to scale it down - 2px to 1px

its ok for a start (:
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