[Eccentric] First submitted layout

[Eccentric]

Hey,
Recently i came up with the idea to develop a PHP game which i'm not going into detail about but i would love you guys to rate and critisize my layout if applicable.

http://www.uploadz.co.uk/470layout_sample.gif

I will be adding more into the banner after i've done the graphics for the site.

Eccentric.

[Blob]

www.lipsum.com - filter text.

[Eccentric]

Filler text*

I just couldnt be bothered to open firefox, ratings though please.

Eccentric.

[Blob]

Filler text*

I just couldnt be bothered to open firefox, ratings though please.

Eccentric.

No, i meant filter. And i was meant to write dummy text

[Aflux]

OK, I'm not going to lie but it sucks.

If you want me to properly review it, ask.

[Eccentric]

Properly review it, Thanks.

Eccentric.

[ScottDiamond.]

Sorry, but that's awful!

There is NO style to it, the font is just wrong, that banner needs to be ripped up and the Text in the banner is GARG.

And don't get smart with someone who knows what he is talking about. "/

[Eccentric]

Sorry, but that's awful!

There is NO style to it, the font is just wrong, that banner needs to be ripped up and the Text in the banner is GARG.

And don't get smart with someone who knows what he is talking about. "/

I'll be as smart as I want to be at least put some suggestion in why it doesn't look good atleast don't just say ohh thats crap rip it up, how can I, I havn't printed it on to paper to rip up have I.

Eccentric.

[ScottDiamond.]

I'll be as smart as I want to be at least put some suggestion in why it doesn't look good atleast don't just say ohh thats crap rip it up, how can I, I havn't printed it on to paper to rip up have I.

Eccentric.

You look like an idiot when you are trying to act smart. I obviously have told you what doesn't look good.

[Eccentric]

You look like an idiot when you are trying to act smart. I obviously have told you what doesn't look good.
-.- If you could "read" then you would know i was saying "how could i improve this" but oviously not. I'm not acting smart.

READ: To look at and understand the meaning of written or printed words.

Eccentric.

[Aflux]

You're trying to be funny, well done, you have failed.

I'll review it in a bit.

[ScottDiamond.]

-.- If you could "read" then you would know i was saying "how could i improve this" but oviously not. I'm not acting smart.

READ: To look at and understand the meaning of written or printed words.

Eccentric.

If you could read, you'd realise I told you to rip up the banner. Infact, just delete that crap from your hardrive - it's pathetic.

And again, you are acting smart. If you are going to attempt to be smart at least know what you are being smart about.

[Eccentric]

I'm amazing at failier so I don't really care to tell the truth.
Scott you make me laugh I dont even know why im wasting my energy on you.

Eccentric.

[ScottDiamond.]

I'm amazing at failier so I don't really care to tell the truth.
Scott you make me laugh I dont even know why im wasting my energy on you.

Eccentric.

Typical response when you know you are wrong.

[Lilian]

Typical response when you know you are wrong.


I luv your criticism.

Theres nothing to it tbh.. The green looks horrible aswell.

[Eccentric]

Thank you lily :)
How do you reckon i should improve on it?

Eccentric.

[Lilian]

Thank you lily :)
How do you reckon i should improve on it?

Eccentric.


Start again? I mean like keep the same design in mind but improve in all areas and test new colours out. And sort your edges out on the banner aswell :)

[Eccentric]

Ok thank you.
+rep sorry its only the one point.

Eccentric.

[Scania]

Lily, Tbh, Id rather buy that layout than LOOK at yours. soz.

We know who you are, Jamie, we dont need eccentric at the end of ebery post mate,

I dont like it on my oppinion, I dunno how you could improve it tbh, its too early to think (04:44)

Regards,

[Blob]

www.colourlovers.com

find a nice pallette then go off that

[Eccentric]

Lily, Tbh, Id rather buy that layout than LOOK at yours. soz.

We know who you are, Jamie, we dont need eccentric at the end of ebery post mate,

I dont like it on my oppinion, I dunno how you could improve it tbh, its too early to think (04:44)

Regards,

In reply to that Metro, you are correct, The reason i wanted a new account was is to start fresh and leave all the crap behind on my last account. May i ask how did you know anyway? But ok the secrets out.

Jamie. :P

[L!nK]

good luck reading 3GO essay.

Start again, like blob said, go to that site and look at some colours your ones don't even go.
Read tutorials first to get how to do stuff etc.

gd try.