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Naruto!
07-08-2007, 12:13 PM
http://i10.tinypic.com/6d0sppw

First ever habbo alt

Technologic
07-08-2007, 12:15 PM
It's quite good, 7/10 +rep for a good try but there are quite a few pixel errors. Fix them up and it will look great :D

Naruto!
07-08-2007, 12:16 PM
thanks Alex

Laura<3
07-08-2007, 06:01 PM
as said above there are a few errors ive circled them for you so you can see them (: ill explain what you need to fix about it aswell so you can (:
(from left to right)

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/976/errorsvl9.png

1. the corner is abit dodgy cause some bits go out and some bits go in it needs to be squared off

2. the bottom of the door isnt isometric the top part of it is spot on so you need to do the same for the bottom part

3. it looks like you drew this line with a pencil its not isometric either it needs to be like the other diagonal sides

4. theres an error where the line changes from 2 to 1 - it happened twice



other then the small errors you made is pretty good
if you fixed them it would pretty much be 10/10 (: well done x
but cause its not perfect atm and has a few errors 8/10 but considering it is your first ill give you a 9 :p
+rep
wd
xx

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