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Bef
13-05-2005, 05:28 PM
Hey this is one of my poems iv written for gcse english. I write poems about my life and how i feel. This is um about an ex boyfriend.

With my eyes i could see,
Deep into his own.
Two shining gemstones glistening in the sun.

With my nose i could smell,
That famillier smell.
A mix of Joop and stale cigerette smoke.

With my lips i could taste,
The sweetness of his own.
With every kiss i worked to so hard to earn.

With my ears i could hear,
A heart felt whisper.
Three little words ive learnt to hate.

With my entire being i could feel,
Every punch he threw.
Why do the ones you love hurt you the most?

jesus
13-05-2005, 06:02 PM
That is so cuet! xD

Bef
13-05-2005, 06:03 PM
Pssst Jamie it aint sposed to be cute :P Ty 4 rep anyway hunny1

MYKE!
13-05-2005, 06:18 PM
repified.

scottish
13-05-2005, 06:21 PM
+rep Nice Poem :o

Bef
13-05-2005, 08:39 PM
Thanku guys -Big hugg- I love everyone today!!

Y!
13-05-2005, 08:52 PM
Very nice and I agree with Jamie very cute ;P

Bef
13-05-2005, 09:02 PM
-Bites- KAI!

Y!
13-05-2005, 09:05 PM
*Crys* :'(

--Saiyan--
13-05-2005, 09:46 PM
Good poem

bwabyadri
21-05-2005, 09:41 AM
C00l I like it

ChloeDust
21-05-2005, 09:53 AM
Good poem, its very moving :'( 9/10 +rep

Pulchritudinous
21-05-2005, 12:09 PM
Really nice, excellent finish, you've spelt the title wrong though, it's senseless.
Great poem!

Bef
21-05-2005, 03:42 PM
Lol Im crud at spelling ;] O welll!

hedgeog325
24-05-2005, 10:14 PM
Very good poem :D

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