A lil something... [Archive]

Painiac

13-05-2005, 09:28 PM

Small Poem...

What happened to the working class?
Nike, Reebok and Addidas.(sp?)
Scratch-cards, pimples, ecstasy.
Hurrah for the 21st century..

Feedback if possible.

Ben xx

13-05-2005, 09:29 PM

A bit negative isn't it?

Painiac

14-05-2005, 03:58 PM

I know but most of my work is negative... I use poetry/writing to get out negative feelings.. I like feeling happy lol thnx for feedback

Yayse

14-05-2005, 04:57 PM

um sp, its adidas i think. apart from that its a good poem

Emicat

14-05-2005, 09:08 PM

Hmmm..sounds like a chav to me....
Still a good poem though. I let my feelings out in poems too. Read my "Brat" poem. Its about killing a little brat who always gets their way.

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