my 1st ever Furni thing

[-jupo]

made this pool on ms paint
Loads of errors but plzz tell me what you think
My 1st ever alt

[PaulMacC]

Pretty neat for yuor fist alt, It has a few errors but you'll learn to make alts without them in time, The shading well there's a tutorial on shading around here, try finding it and reading it.

8/10 great for your 1st

[Duck Hunt]

There Is Alot Of Errors & You Saved As .BMP, Thats A No-no, Its Good For A First Though

ALWAYS
SAVE
AS
.PNG

>.<

[dbgtz]

I can spot 2 errors.
Good for your first furni alt

[ExtraKen]

Nice for a first

but as said tehre some errors
and try to use not so bright colours :)

[-jupo]

Would some1 post a picture back showing as many errors as you can and ill try to re-correct them.

[RandomManJay]

Nice for a first, a few errors but nice, 7/10

[Technologic]

Pretty ok :D 8/10

[Mattch]

Good but as said can spot errors

9/10 for your first go

[Mario]

There Is Alot Of Errors & You Saved As .BMP, Thats A No-no, Its Good For A First Though

ALWAYS
SAVE
AS
.PNG


>.<

theres nothing wrong with the quality its up to him if he wants to take up more space.
and i wouldnt use lines against lines unless its to add lighting. it makes it seem bulky. but very well
done for a first.

[Chocobos]

i like it for a first alt, my first alt was a swimming pool too i think.

They are very hard to add depth, 8/10

[PriceTags]

There Is Alot Of Errors & You Saved As .BMP, Thats A No-no, Its Good For A First Though

ALWAYS
SAVE
AS
.PNG

>.<

If that was a comment on my first alt, I'd feel like a right piece of poo. But I'd take the liberty of pointing out that you have a lot of errors in your post, 15 to be exact, and they're all capital letters.

You can't prove he saved as .bmp, because the Habbox attatchments ruin everything.

Thank you, and good night, much love.

[-jupo]

Can some1 tell me the errors so i can correct them

[User43]

Well done for your first one :)

[-jupo]

I Know its crap But i wa bored

[Gangster]

thats good

[.Suzu.]

Hmm... It's nice for a first attempt
I'd love to see what you do with it once you've improved
:D

[Georgiie]

That's a great first try. Keep trying, I can't make anything on paint.