My 1st HABBO style layout

[Mashi]

Hello ,

As you have clicked onto the thread it seems you're interested. I am going to tell you a little about it. It has 3 boxes:
Banner
Navigation
Content
All of these are a good size. This is my 1st habbo layout and ive only EVER done 2 other non habbo layouts. I didn't C+P andthing and I have proof in the PSD's. I would like ?/10 and a reason. I would like suggestions to. Also do you think I could sell it?
http://www.uploadz.co.uk/123stage3copy.png

[Eccentric]

7/10 i like the banner but further down the page i don't think it looks too good :( why this is i honestly don't no.
edit: i like the marquee bit :)

[waania]

Ahh Well.. thats a good layout.. You can easily sell it..!!:P

[waania]

ermm.. 7.5/10 :P

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[Mashi]

If I was to sell it what needs changing?

[Mashi]

UPDATE BREAKING NEWS:

Ive added a banner and touched a few pixel mistakes up. Any offers goto webmarket and post there. BTW I really need help in selling it!!

http://www.uploadz.co.uk/695stage3copy2.png

[Taz]

Try putting dummy text and a dummy banner, the look of content will sucker the suckers into buying your layout.

[Invent]

Not worth selling it.

[Mashi]

Okia - Ill Lori impsum it :) can i Use your Sig image as banner?

[Taz]

Yeah, you can!

[Invent]

Lori impsum
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[Mashi]

Even Better ;)

http://www.uploadz.co.uk/134stage3copy3.png

C+C Pleash

[Drompo]

Maybe make the navigation thinner and make content wider or add a right hand column

[Taz]

btw make it look like habboey, no habbo fansite has Nav Letters that *Text Removed* big. Verdana 9px.

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[ScottDiamond.]

ermm.. 7.5/10 :P

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God, a bit big of a rating for that.


Try putting dummy text and a dummy banner, the look of content will sucker the suckers into buying your layout.

You need to seriously be shot with that image in your signature. Professional web design? You can't even make a decent banner, jesus christ - what's the world coming to?


Even Better ;)

http://www.uploadz.co.uk/134stage3copy3.png

C+C Pleash

Comments, crap. Criticism, far too much to post here. Though, this isn't your first layout if I'm correct, I remember you made one a while ago. Also, attempting to sell that would be humilliating - and I would laugh at you.


btw make it look like habboey, no habbo fansite has Nav Letters that *Text Removed* big. Verdana 9px.

9px is junk. 10px looks nice, 11px if you wish to 'reach all audiences'.

[Mashi]

Scott Ive got you - 1st habbo layout.

[ScottDiamond.]

Scott Ive got you - 1st habbo layout.

You've got me? That sent a shiver up my spine. Was it you that made a dark blue and white layout?

[Mashi]

No Ive Only ever made 2 light blue layouts apart from this.

http://www.uploadz.co.uk/588stage4copy.png

Is This Better?

[Invent]

Sorryyy but I think it's horrible.

[ScottDiamond.]

No it's not. In fact, it's 10x worse.

[Mashi]

What will improve it?