Sound Of Death [Poem]

[lukeisok]

Sound Of Death

Can you hear the sound of a loved calling
Can you hear the sound of death
Can you hear the sound of misery
Speaking to you with thier last breath...

Do you hear the sound of faith lossed
Do you hear the sound of fear
Do you hear the sound of demise
Crying with your last tear...

Will you listen to thier will
Will you listen to thier requests
Will you look at them in the casket
When thier heart stops in thier chest...

Have you ever thought about death
Have you ever worried about this
Have you ever dreamed a sad dream
About giving a final wish....

Please post your views on this.

Thank you.

[lauralol]

Aww Luke, good poem, hope you feel better soon :)

[Eckuii]

Nice poem. Thinking about death :o Brightend my day up :D

[lukeisok]

Woot,

Another Satisfied Customer =']

[shane9870]

good poem mate ( was it u who i was with in floorfairy room 2day )

[Jinxxed]

Will you listen to thier will
Will you listen to thier requests
Will you look at them in the casket
When thier stops in thier chest...
Heart is supposed to be there ?

[Vause]

:o very good

[lukeisok]

Heart is supposed to be there ?

Oops,

Yep that bit is =P

Corrected it.

=D

[Jinxxed]

Lol...
Great Poem :)