Charlie and the chocolate factory

[JackBuddy]

Ok, I also made this last friday, I know it looks a bit shabby in places (especially under the tunnel entrance) but I was on a budget of a throne, all my furni was piled into this room. Go about 2 HC's left, so if you could give me suggestions on what to add / removed I'd be very grateful! Oh, and on the right side is the chocolate river, I was going to make a boat but it ruined it, thought it was better without. On the left side there's the great glass elevator and the town. Thanks!

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4461/charliesc8.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Hiro]

The main part I like is the elevator, nice work :)

[@xP]

I love it, very well done! :D

[Catzsy]

Amazing - well done :) xox

[Grimmauld]

the river is lovely.

[alex 1889]

the floor and wall dont match and the middle area looks too plain and random. Still a good room and i like it.

7.75/10

[JackBuddy]

the floor and wall dont match and the middle area looks too plain and random. Still a good room and i like it.

7.75/10
yeah thanks, was gonna make a seating area out of area sofas.

[e5..]

Nice but you could add a bit more in the middle :P 7/10<3

[Boxiel]

That elevator - amazing +rep if I can.

[JackBuddy]

Thanks guys- as I said. I will put a few area sofas there in the middle, and I didn't want the backstage areas to be crammed with furni really.

[Mattch]

i would comment but theirs no screenie :(

[JackBuddy]

http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=399978
:S

[Spy,]

ye add somert in middle other than that 8/10

[jesus]

I like the gingerbread houses :)

[Loqo]

Good work Jackbuddy! :)

[JackBuddy]

Thanks for the feedback, I'll soon expand the seating area and maybe even use the new area egg chairs- just 'cos I love them!