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Motorollo
21-05-2005, 01:29 AM
Blood racing thru his body and his veins

He knew it was wrong but he did it anyway

Now it is over and he dont know what to do


Should he lie to everyone or just tell the truth

Motorollo
21-05-2005, 09:04 PM
soz for the double post come on some body read my poen :{

hedgeog325
24-05-2005, 10:12 PM
I think it is a bit short but its ok i suppose :D

Surname
27-05-2005, 03:12 PM
I agree, it has the potential of being a good poem, but it is too short at the moment :)

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