View Full Version : Another attempt
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 05:51 PM
http://i23.tinypic.com/zo9qiw.gifThink i may have cracked it this time, but please rate :)
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 05:52 PM
You have not cracked it this time. It makes out to the view that they are ******ed, and the headings are rubbish along with the button drop navigation. Also, the side boxes are tiny and it bores me looking at it.
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 05:54 PM
you bore me :) nah seriously its getting better tho,
scott im gna tell the truth right,
you never like anyones :P
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 05:57 PM
you bore me :) nah seriously its getting better tho,
scott im gna tell the truth right,
you never like anyones :P
Try a different style. Go with something basic. freecsstemplates.org or whatever the hell it's calleds main layout is nice, simple and clean. Look at Rico - his designs are nice and simple yet he makes a lot of money. Yours looks like dung.
And yes I do like peoples' designs. Designs that are decent and dont resemble my breakfast.
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 05:58 PM
Try a different style. Go with something basic. freecsstemplates.org or whatever the hell it's calleds main layout is nice, simple and clean. Look at Rico - his designs are nice and simple yet he makes a lot of money. Yours looks like dung.
And yes I do like peoples' designs. Designs that are decent and dont resemble my breakfast. about time you show us some of yours :P!
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 06:03 PM
about time you show us some of yours :P!
I've not got any of mine lol...
Hmmm not bad...I think I prefered the other one though.
I would:
-Make the box tops square opposed to round
-Remove the grey line around the box tops it mucks it up
-Make the box tops slightly taller
-Make the general colour scheme darker, a navy blue, like tehupload?
Simplify.
01-10-2007, 06:06 PM
Very good for a 14 year old! 9/10!
RichardKnox
01-10-2007, 06:06 PM
I don't like it. It's not improving from your last one. It doesn't fit well together, it looks like a 'noob' layout, the effects used that is. Keep trying, you'll hopefully get a nice one soon. As for the above comment many 13 year olds design superiorly to that and make money designing professional, I was one, but y'know I'm 14 now ;)
Finkelstien
01-10-2007, 06:06 PM
Its not bad at all but I do agree in saying its not edgy enough and it would bore me to death if I had to visit the site everyday.
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 06:07 PM
I don't like it. It's not improving from your last one. It doesn't fit well together, it looks like a 'noob' layout, the effects used that is. Keep trying, you'll hopefully get a nice one soon. As for the above comment many 13 year olds design superiorly to that and make money designing professional, I was one, but y'know I'm 14 now ;)
Could you tell me the pacific bit that could be worked on?:P
bushi2004
01-10-2007, 06:08 PM
from 1 to 10 like a 9
RichardKnox
01-10-2007, 06:08 PM
The whole thing :)
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 06:09 PM
Ok ill try to bare that in mind hmmm i will play with it i guess :'(
[Oli]
01-10-2007, 06:09 PM
:p scott liked myn, so he does like some :)
People, i know scott sounds a bit... hard but most of the time he has a point in what he sais.
anyway,
It's alright..
maybe...
Change the tabs ? Wen you're going to use drop-shadows please use them in a subtil way. dont go "overboard" on them. Try add a very subtil gradient on the tabs background color.
Use smaller corpses. (fonts). Your font atm there is quite big, try to keep it between 10-11px.
Hmm, at some boxes your text is about 2px from the boxes border. Try have a minimum of 5 to 10 px space between the border and your text
Use a different colour sheme ? you 'could' use that colour sheme, but try some different tints of that colour then. Have a look on this site: http://kuler.adobe.com/
It's alright, but maybe just keep an eye on those points ;)
The whole thing :)
Richard you've 'done a scott on him', hmm I like that, I might use it more often.
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 06:13 PM
;3960536']:p scott liked myn, so he does like some :)
People, i know scott sounds a bit... hard but most of the time he has a point in what he sais.
anyway,
It's alright..
maybe...
Change the tabs ? Wen you're going to use drop-shadows please use them in a subtil way. dont go "overboard" on them. Try add a very subtil gradient on the tabs background color.
Use smaller corpses. (fonts). Your font atm there is quite big, try to keep it between 10-11px.
Hmm, at some boxes your text is about 2px from the boxes border. Try have a minimum of 5 to 10 px space between the border and your text
Use a different colour sheme ? you 'could' use that colour sheme, but try some different tints of that colour then. Have a look on this site: http://kuler.adobe.com/
It's alright, but maybe just keep an eye on those points ;)
words of wisdom :) thanks for the essay at least it helps me out :)
http://www.tehupload.com/7518632154.gif (http://www.tehupload.com)
changed the bg it may liven it up a bit ill try some other stuff
xBenxx
01-10-2007, 06:14 PM
I Like it mate! its a really good design.
+rep
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 06:18 PM
Rep returned thank you :D
I Like it mate! its a really good design.
+rep
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 06:34 PM
UPDATE
http://www.tehupload.com/6901185073.gif
what about them colours? :S
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 07:13 PM
;3960536']:p scott liked myn, so he does like some :)
People, i know scott sounds a bit... hard but most of the time he has a point in what he sais.
Lol. I speak what I think.
Richard you've 'done a scott on him', hmm I like that, I might use it more often.
I'm not as soft as that.
UPDATE
http://www.tehupload.com/6901185073.gif
what about them colours? :S
Umm, no. Lighten the drop shaddow (or kill it) and change the stroke on the boxes. It still looks pathetic though apart from that. I wouldn't bother trying to make it better as you will honestly not get anything from it. Start again is my advice.
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 07:14 PM
Lol. I speak what I think.
I'm not as soft as that.
Umm, no. Lighten the drop shaddow (or kill it) and change the stroke on the boxes. It still looks pathetic though apart from that. I wouldn't bother trying to make it better as you will honestly not get anything from it. Start again is my advice.
3 n half hours for nothing :| i seriously give up no one likes it then **** it
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 07:16 PM
3 n half hours for nothing :| i seriously give up no one likes it then **** it
Good. Start your grounds with something decent.
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 07:16 PM
Good. Start your grounds with something decent.
think i will hmmm hell sounds good to me O.o
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 07:17 PM
think i will hmmm hell sounds good to me O.o
You are strange.
http://sitepoint.com
View entries there.
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 07:18 PM
You are strange.
http://sitepoint.com
View entries there.
makes two of us :)
lol ok... i guess.
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 07:23 PM
makes two of us :)
lol ok... i guess.
Indeed it does. ;).
RichardKnox
01-10-2007, 07:33 PM
Sitepoint Comp Entries are mainly crap fyi. Also Eccentric don't be disheartened, one of the biggest mistakes a designer can do is work on something going nowhere, one of a designers best assets is the ability to move on :)
Eccentric
01-10-2007, 07:45 PM
Lol anyone got any good tuts that i can build my 'graphic' side up with? preferably photoshop.
Magiced
01-10-2007, 08:17 PM
you bore me :) nah seriously its getting better tho,
scott im gna tell the truth right,
you never like anyones :P
Quite true =]
I'm liking this layout (Y)
Looks rather funky =]
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 08:18 PM
Sitepoint Comp Entries are mainly crap fyi. Also Eccentric don't be disheartened, one of the biggest mistakes a designer can do is work on something going nowhere, one of a designers best assets is the ability to move on :)
Some are crap, some are very good. I'm giving the guy beginner grounds not advanced crap that he should study for homework lol.
You should see Ecentric in real life hes about 2ft tall
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 09:06 PM
You should see Ecentric in real life hes about 2ft tall
Very small?
Very small?
MMM...very,very,small
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 09:20 PM
MMM...very,very,small
Just like your penis.
Just like your penis.
Atleast mines not on my head ^^. Anyway I hope he doesnt see this, hes at the right height to headbutt me in the crotch
Invent
01-10-2007, 09:25 PM
Atleast mines not on my head ^^. Anyway I hope he doesnt see this, hes at the right height to headbutt me in the crotch
******* hell, how old are you guys?
how old are you guys?
You some kind of pedo or something?
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 09:31 PM
******* hell, how old are you guys?
I'm just mucking around, lol.
Invent
01-10-2007, 09:35 PM
You some kind of pedo or something?
Ok, you're seriously not helping yourself here by carrying on making immature jokes -.-
ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 09:37 PM
Ok, you're seriously not helping yourself here by carrying on making immature jokes -.-
George is a bad smell.
Oh look its invent, I dont know why, it just is.
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/394/inventqj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I have just finished my geog coursework so im a little bit....
Invent
01-10-2007, 09:45 PM
(y)
<//longer>
Eccentric
02-10-2007, 05:46 PM
Incorrect, I'm actually 6ft 3inches. George is actualyl 5ft 3 inches and im what a year younger poor kid.
Incorrect, I'm actually 6ft 3inches. George is actualyl 5ft 3 inches and im what a year younger poor kid.
Thats the spirit, never give up.
Eccentric
02-10-2007, 07:07 PM
we shud get a pic of us together :) green giant and tiny noob
ScottDiamond.
02-10-2007, 07:09 PM
we shud get a pic of us together :) green giant and tiny noob
Dumb and dumber.
Eccentric
02-10-2007, 08:00 PM
u shud join us dumb dumber and azzhole O.o
we shud get a pic of us together :) green giant and tiny noob
Omg mods hes asking for a pic of me, pedo, infactionzzzz him
ScottDiamond.
02-10-2007, 08:38 PM
u shud join us dumb dumber and azzhole O.o
Dumb and lame fool.
Chippiewill
03-10-2007, 05:18 AM
did you know that pedo was spelled puedo?
Eccentric
03-10-2007, 01:59 PM
Dumb and lame fool. :) i love you scott.
:) i love you scott.
Dont we all
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