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Eccentric
01-10-2007, 05:51 PM
http://i23.tinypic.com/zo9qiw.gifThink i may have cracked it this time, but please rate :)

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 05:52 PM
You have not cracked it this time. It makes out to the view that they are ******ed, and the headings are rubbish along with the button drop navigation. Also, the side boxes are tiny and it bores me looking at it.

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 05:54 PM
you bore me :) nah seriously its getting better tho,
scott im gna tell the truth right,
you never like anyones :P

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 05:57 PM
you bore me :) nah seriously its getting better tho,
scott im gna tell the truth right,
you never like anyones :P

Try a different style. Go with something basic. freecsstemplates.org or whatever the hell it's calleds main layout is nice, simple and clean. Look at Rico - his designs are nice and simple yet he makes a lot of money. Yours looks like dung.

And yes I do like peoples' designs. Designs that are decent and dont resemble my breakfast.

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 05:58 PM
Try a different style. Go with something basic. freecsstemplates.org or whatever the hell it's calleds main layout is nice, simple and clean. Look at Rico - his designs are nice and simple yet he makes a lot of money. Yours looks like dung.

And yes I do like peoples' designs. Designs that are decent and dont resemble my breakfast. about time you show us some of yours :P!

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 06:03 PM
about time you show us some of yours :P!

I've not got any of mine lol...

Oni
01-10-2007, 06:05 PM
Hmmm not bad...I think I prefered the other one though.

I would:
-Make the box tops square opposed to round
-Remove the grey line around the box tops it mucks it up
-Make the box tops slightly taller
-Make the general colour scheme darker, a navy blue, like tehupload?

Simplify.
01-10-2007, 06:06 PM
Very good for a 14 year old! 9/10!

RichardKnox
01-10-2007, 06:06 PM
I don't like it. It's not improving from your last one. It doesn't fit well together, it looks like a 'noob' layout, the effects used that is. Keep trying, you'll hopefully get a nice one soon. As for the above comment many 13 year olds design superiorly to that and make money designing professional, I was one, but y'know I'm 14 now ;)

Finkelstien
01-10-2007, 06:06 PM
Its not bad at all but I do agree in saying its not edgy enough and it would bore me to death if I had to visit the site everyday.

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 06:07 PM
I don't like it. It's not improving from your last one. It doesn't fit well together, it looks like a 'noob' layout, the effects used that is. Keep trying, you'll hopefully get a nice one soon. As for the above comment many 13 year olds design superiorly to that and make money designing professional, I was one, but y'know I'm 14 now ;)
Could you tell me the pacific bit that could be worked on?:P

bushi2004
01-10-2007, 06:08 PM
from 1 to 10 like a 9

RichardKnox
01-10-2007, 06:08 PM
The whole thing :)

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 06:09 PM
Ok ill try to bare that in mind hmmm i will play with it i guess :'(

[Oli]
01-10-2007, 06:09 PM
:p scott liked myn, so he does like some :)
People, i know scott sounds a bit... hard but most of the time he has a point in what he sais.

anyway,

It's alright..
maybe...


Change the tabs ? Wen you're going to use drop-shadows please use them in a subtil way. dont go "overboard" on them. Try add a very subtil gradient on the tabs background color.
Use smaller corpses. (fonts). Your font atm there is quite big, try to keep it between 10-11px.
Hmm, at some boxes your text is about 2px from the boxes border. Try have a minimum of 5 to 10 px space between the border and your text
Use a different colour sheme ? you 'could' use that colour sheme, but try some different tints of that colour then. Have a look on this site: http://kuler.adobe.com/


It's alright, but maybe just keep an eye on those points ;)

Oni
01-10-2007, 06:09 PM
The whole thing :)
Richard you've 'done a scott on him', hmm I like that, I might use it more often.

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 06:13 PM
;3960536']:p scott liked myn, so he does like some :)
People, i know scott sounds a bit... hard but most of the time he has a point in what he sais.

anyway,

It's alright..
maybe...

Change the tabs ? Wen you're going to use drop-shadows please use them in a subtil way. dont go "overboard" on them. Try add a very subtil gradient on the tabs background color.
Use smaller corpses. (fonts). Your font atm there is quite big, try to keep it between 10-11px.
Hmm, at some boxes your text is about 2px from the boxes border. Try have a minimum of 5 to 10 px space between the border and your text
Use a different colour sheme ? you 'could' use that colour sheme, but try some different tints of that colour then. Have a look on this site: http://kuler.adobe.com/
It's alright, but maybe just keep an eye on those points ;)
words of wisdom :) thanks for the essay at least it helps me out :)

http://www.tehupload.com/7518632154.gif (http://www.tehupload.com)

changed the bg it may liven it up a bit ill try some other stuff

xBenxx
01-10-2007, 06:14 PM
I Like it mate! its a really good design.

+rep

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 06:18 PM
Rep returned thank you :D
I Like it mate! its a really good design.

+rep

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 06:34 PM
UPDATE
http://www.tehupload.com/6901185073.gif
what about them colours? :S

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 07:13 PM
;3960536']:p scott liked myn, so he does like some :)
People, i know scott sounds a bit... hard but most of the time he has a point in what he sais.

Lol. I speak what I think.


Richard you've 'done a scott on him', hmm I like that, I might use it more often.

I'm not as soft as that.


UPDATE
http://www.tehupload.com/6901185073.gif
what about them colours? :S

Umm, no. Lighten the drop shaddow (or kill it) and change the stroke on the boxes. It still looks pathetic though apart from that. I wouldn't bother trying to make it better as you will honestly not get anything from it. Start again is my advice.

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 07:14 PM
Lol. I speak what I think.



I'm not as soft as that.



Umm, no. Lighten the drop shaddow (or kill it) and change the stroke on the boxes. It still looks pathetic though apart from that. I wouldn't bother trying to make it better as you will honestly not get anything from it. Start again is my advice.
3 n half hours for nothing :| i seriously give up no one likes it then **** it

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 07:16 PM
3 n half hours for nothing :| i seriously give up no one likes it then **** it

Good. Start your grounds with something decent.

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 07:16 PM
Good. Start your grounds with something decent.
think i will hmmm hell sounds good to me O.o

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 07:17 PM
think i will hmmm hell sounds good to me O.o

You are strange.

http://sitepoint.com

View entries there.

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 07:18 PM
You are strange.

http://sitepoint.com

View entries there.
makes two of us :)

lol ok... i guess.

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 07:23 PM
makes two of us :)

lol ok... i guess.

Indeed it does. ;).

RichardKnox
01-10-2007, 07:33 PM
Sitepoint Comp Entries are mainly crap fyi. Also Eccentric don't be disheartened, one of the biggest mistakes a designer can do is work on something going nowhere, one of a designers best assets is the ability to move on :)

Eccentric
01-10-2007, 07:45 PM
Lol anyone got any good tuts that i can build my 'graphic' side up with? preferably photoshop.

Magiced
01-10-2007, 08:17 PM
you bore me :) nah seriously its getting better tho,
scott im gna tell the truth right,
you never like anyones :P

Quite true =]

I'm liking this layout (Y)
Looks rather funky =]

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 08:18 PM
Sitepoint Comp Entries are mainly crap fyi. Also Eccentric don't be disheartened, one of the biggest mistakes a designer can do is work on something going nowhere, one of a designers best assets is the ability to move on :)

Some are crap, some are very good. I'm giving the guy beginner grounds not advanced crap that he should study for homework lol.

Oni
01-10-2007, 09:04 PM
You should see Ecentric in real life hes about 2ft tall

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 09:06 PM
You should see Ecentric in real life hes about 2ft tall

Very small?

Oni
01-10-2007, 09:12 PM
Very small?
MMM...very,very,small

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 09:20 PM
MMM...very,very,small

Just like your penis.

Oni
01-10-2007, 09:22 PM
Just like your penis.
Atleast mines not on my head ^^. Anyway I hope he doesnt see this, hes at the right height to headbutt me in the crotch

Invent
01-10-2007, 09:25 PM
Atleast mines not on my head ^^. Anyway I hope he doesnt see this, hes at the right height to headbutt me in the crotch

******* hell, how old are you guys?

Oni
01-10-2007, 09:28 PM
how old are you guys?
You some kind of pedo or something?

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 09:31 PM
******* hell, how old are you guys?

I'm just mucking around, lol.

Invent
01-10-2007, 09:35 PM
You some kind of pedo or something?

Ok, you're seriously not helping yourself here by carrying on making immature jokes -.-

ScottDiamond.
01-10-2007, 09:37 PM
Ok, you're seriously not helping yourself here by carrying on making immature jokes -.-

George is a bad smell.

Oni
01-10-2007, 09:39 PM
Oh look its invent, I dont know why, it just is.
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/394/inventqj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I have just finished my geog coursework so im a little bit....

Invent
01-10-2007, 09:45 PM
(y)

<//longer>

Eccentric
02-10-2007, 05:46 PM
Incorrect, I'm actually 6ft 3inches. George is actualyl 5ft 3 inches and im what a year younger poor kid.

Oni
02-10-2007, 06:53 PM
Incorrect, I'm actually 6ft 3inches. George is actualyl 5ft 3 inches and im what a year younger poor kid.
Thats the spirit, never give up.

Eccentric
02-10-2007, 07:07 PM
we shud get a pic of us together :) green giant and tiny noob

ScottDiamond.
02-10-2007, 07:09 PM
we shud get a pic of us together :) green giant and tiny noob

Dumb and dumber.

Eccentric
02-10-2007, 08:00 PM
u shud join us dumb dumber and azzhole O.o

Oni
02-10-2007, 08:10 PM
we shud get a pic of us together :) green giant and tiny noob
Omg mods hes asking for a pic of me, pedo, infactionzzzz him

ScottDiamond.
02-10-2007, 08:38 PM
u shud join us dumb dumber and azzhole O.o

Dumb and lame fool.

Chippiewill
03-10-2007, 05:18 AM
did you know that pedo was spelled puedo?

Eccentric
03-10-2007, 01:59 PM
Dumb and lame fool. :) i love you scott.

Oni
03-10-2007, 03:49 PM
:) i love you scott.
Dont we all

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