Yakuza Syndicate Alt v2

[Robyn78]

This was version 1.

http://i21.tinypic.com/2i6i6ph.png

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And this is version 2!

http://i24.tinypic.com/21n1wr8.png

Ive changed:

o The pants (they look ripped now)
o The hoodie
o Tape on the hands (like boxing)
o Blood splatter
o Weird gun in pocket
o Army marks on cheeks
o New make-up

Coming with version 3:
o Messy hair
o Maybe another mafia leader

Anyway rate & Slate!
Took about.. 30 mins.
(Im slow)
Lol.

[whoooosh]

the shoes just look like spotty shoes
kinda look like she has tribal face paints as well
good improvent though
6/10

[GhostFace-]

yea nothing realy that noticable only the stuff on her face

[Robyn78]

i respect your comments but personally i think its a lot better than u have said.

i think its a big improvement, and this is one of my best alterations i have ever done.

[H0BJ0B]

No offence, but thought the first one was better ??? Lol.

[pleasanthell]

yeah k.. jw why u asking for c+c if ure all like *ohh well no ofeence but i think its better* c+c is to help you so here goes. needs shading
OTT on the blood
looks too much
shoes are spotty =]
5/10

[Loqo]

Not bad. :)

[ItsDave]

Dont use msn default red. Change it to darker, Blood is actually considerably dark. Like this but a tad brighter.

[siz]

Back in 2005 i helped a friend make a mafia called Yakuza Syndicate Mafia it was quite good lol

But for the alt, I think a 5/10 does the job?