A Hotel View

[-Xiangu-]

i didnt like my previous pixel art so i decided to go look at some tutorials on shading etc and make a new, good alteration. although a WIP its taken me along time lol im going to not copy anything off of habbo at all so its all completely origional :)

i know the grass is a bit odd as i just C+Ped a bit of grass over and over as it would take alot of time to do it free hand

well rate/slate at this point.

the cloud was hard XD

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/4190/pixelatedart3uc5.png (http://imageshack.us)



Arkron

[@xP]

no i don't like is soz

[-Xiangu-]

thats ok but can you tell me why you don't like it and how i could improve please :)

[@xP]

it's very basic

it looks blures the cloud doesn't look like a cloud ect.

[-Xiangu-]

its not meant to be blured lol im gona try uploading it again though so its origional size

done:

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/4190/pixelatedart3uc5.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Pix]

Too easy , aim high .

[jesus]

its just some grass and the sky rly

i like the colours n that but more needs to be goin on

use this as a starter for something big :]

[Pix]

like Cheese said.. get this and make it something big
Like your own version of a hotel, maybe

[-Xiangu-]

it does say in the tital "hotel view" and in the paragraph "W.I.P" (work in progress XD) but thanks for the comments, i decided it wont be a hotel view though, more of a habbo town

[Pix]

Yeh habbo town will look nice too ;)

[Ashley]

The cloud doesn't look very habbo-ish.

[-Xiangu-]

how can i make the cloud more habboish

and now stage two is finished:

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5341/pixelatedart2pg6.png (http://imageshack.us)

[ItsDave]

And you dislike other peoples pretty good work? :rolleyes: You amaze me. I wouldn't attempt grass to be honest... it always looks a tad stupid. And whats up with the cloud? Looks like a mountain top? Sorry I dont like it. 6/10

[Zoe!]

my sister can make better grass than that and she is 9.
i like the road, cus do wiv some road markings tho
the clouds r crap
4/10

[Pix]

Ummm Do more shading to the roads, Copy the Cloud's if you want it to look good
Not everyone can do complete original work ;)
Don't aim high straight away, it comes with time

[-Xiangu-]

Right #1 Dave i like alot of peoples work i know your still in a grudge with me just because i didnt like 1 piece of your work, and why do you flame me anyway? i attempt an alt and you don't give any constructive critisism you to be frank should not be habbox staff

Zoe! that doesn't help me at all now does it? its called constructive critisism, ever heard of it? you tell me how to make it better you don't just insult me :/

Thanks moocard for the CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM but i don't want to take habbo's clouds i will try changing them but not making any promises lol, i always copy habbo and i just want to do something thats completely my own

[Pix]

Up to you, Good luck

[-Xiangu-]

to be honest i would have put this in *non habbo alterations* as a non habbo alt but then i would get flamed for having an iso drawing in non habbo alts so meh

[Pix]

i don't think its ment to be in non-habbo alterations section.

[-Xiangu-]

i was origionally intending it to not be habbo based but i would get flamed for putting an isometric drawing in non habbo alts anyway

[Janet Snakehole]

Like others have said.. too basic.

I dont like it, sorry.

[-Xiangu-]

ok thanks, it is only a w.i.p and i dont consider myself to be really good at alts so its sorta my level stuff lol ^^

[Loqo]

Its okay..