Turnip Poem (help + rep)

[its-me-sam]

I started writing this about a turnip just a while ago its for my english :P

I stumped into the market
One horrible wainy day
When all at once i saw a sight
that took my breath away

A holy being from above
The orbs of red and cream
And as powerfull as a king

They sat there like a hammer
Ready to be thrown!
But i know i can not chuck them
For the Lord may turn me into stone


Ok Thats just a ruff idea of what i want i also need atleast one more paragraph... has to make turnips out to be AMAZING! for the next paragraph i was thinknig of telling the reader what it was :P cause you dont no its a turnip yet...

ANy thing you can help me change? like that king bit http://thehabboforum.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_confused.gif or help me with the last paragragh...

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[msb.]

tbh I am crap at poems but I can spot a good poem from 1001 miles away and this person certainly caught my eye, tbh this is probs not the best answer u wanted but it is wicked :D

[its-me-sam]

Woops i missed out a line in the second paragraph ;[

[Ealo]

I stumped into the market
One horrible rainy day
When all at once i saw a sight
that took my breath away

A holy being from above
The orbs of red and cream
It caught my eye as i walked on by
And as powerfull as a king

They sat there like a hammer
Ready to be thrown!
But i know i can not chuck them
For the Lord may turn me to stone

This poems nearly at an end,
Can you guess what it is?
That was on a stall one rainy day,
Inspiring me to write this,

haha, that sucks

[its-me-sam]

Lol thanks :D i may use bits of that you so kind ofr that! if any one else wants to have a go it woould be great andi can put em all together and change it a bit + rep to you :D