Big habbo :S

[Kyle]

I know, the hands and the hair a bit wierd but It's only my second alt..


Please, tell me where it could be better and what I could do to make it better

here it is:
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/5270/enlargcq4.png

[Nemo]

i think you need to like straighten out everything, coz everything seems to go wonky somewhere... also big alts are very hard for just your second... i'd go for something easier! 7/10 for a 2nd.

[:odey:]

Wow?

First Attempt? Thats amazing =P

I really cant do it! The colour throws me,

9/10 + rep :)

Just fix the bottem of the legs,

[Agesilaus]

Well, you haven't done too badly on it. It looks a bit smooth in a lot of places, maybe some more shading, a bit more thicker outlining. The shoulders need evening up just a bit, the left side of the shoulder in the image is a bit slanted too far, try evening that up a bit. The shoes are not looking too bad, the pants are just a bit too bulky around the ankles but it's not so bad there.

Just a bit more shading in and around places and it should look better.

To draw a replica of something off by scratch is not easy. It's a good try. =]

6.5/10

[whoooosh]

try to straighten up all the lines
very good for 2nd alt tho
7/10

[Kyle]

i think you need to like straighten out everything, coz everything seems to go wonky somewhere... also big alts are very hard for just your second... i'd go for something easier! 7/10 for a 2nd.


What'd you suggest I do?

[Kyle]

Really sorry for double post but It wouldn't let me edit

I've tried to improve it a little :
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7028/enlargqb3.png

[Agesilaus]

Okay, I've seen you've made the shoulders more even, that looks a bit better.

[Pix]

Its Nice for a 2nd alt like others said..
Straighten up the lines and it will look more nice..
Well done tho, 7/10 for second alt

[Cruiserz]

LOL, CHEERS FOR MAKING ME LAUGH KYLO!

It's PLERO Btw ;]