View Full Version : [Alteration] Big habbo :S
I know, the hands and the hair a bit wierd but It's only my second alt..
Please, tell me where it could be better and what I could do to make it better
here it is:
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/5270/enlargcq4.png
i think you need to like straighten out everything, coz everything seems to go wonky somewhere... also big alts are very hard for just your second... i'd go for something easier! 7/10 for a 2nd.
:odey:
24-10-2007, 10:57 AM
Wow?
First Attempt? Thats amazing =P
I really cant do it! The colour throws me,
9/10 + rep :)
Just fix the bottem of the legs,
Agesilaus
24-10-2007, 11:03 AM
Well, you haven't done too badly on it. It looks a bit smooth in a lot of places, maybe some more shading, a bit more thicker outlining. The shoulders need evening up just a bit, the left side of the shoulder in the image is a bit slanted too far, try evening that up a bit. The shoes are not looking too bad, the pants are just a bit too bulky around the ankles but it's not so bad there.
Just a bit more shading in and around places and it should look better.
To draw a replica of something off by scratch is not easy. It's a good try. =]
6.5/10
whoooosh
24-10-2007, 11:11 AM
try to straighten up all the lines
very good for 2nd alt tho
7/10
i think you need to like straighten out everything, coz everything seems to go wonky somewhere... also big alts are very hard for just your second... i'd go for something easier! 7/10 for a 2nd.
What'd you suggest I do?
Really sorry for double post but It wouldn't let me edit
I've tried to improve it a little :
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7028/enlargqb3.png
Agesilaus
24-10-2007, 12:29 PM
Okay, I've seen you've made the shoulders more even, that looks a bit better.
Its Nice for a 2nd alt like others said..
Straighten up the lines and it will look more nice..
Well done tho, 7/10 for second alt
Cruiserz
24-10-2007, 01:42 PM
LOL, CHEERS FOR MAKING ME LAUGH KYLO!
It's PLERO Btw ;]
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