Catalogue Page and Classroom for School Furni

[RandomManJay]

I took T0MM0's advice and made a Catalogue Page and a Classroom with the shading advice given by Siz:
I've added some extra furni too (the bell and the teachers portrait)


http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Room.png
Link: http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Room.png (http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Room.png)


I couldn't be bothered making smaller versions of the furni, so I just shrunk them:


http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Catalogue-1.png
Link: http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Catalogue-1.png (http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Catalogue-1.png)

[Browney]

I was right in the mood for slating the hell out of an alt but I can't really find anything blatantly wrong with this. The only thing I would comment on is being more adventurous. You've used the same desk and chair 6 times over. Maybe do some books on top or some pens or even a chemistry set. Overall, really nice. And I'm so proud of you to stop using black lines inside of alts. XD

[Jamesy]

I think you should move the "old School" text higher up. It just doesn't look right there

[Alkaz]

owow thats REALLY good

[RandomManJay]

I think you should move the "old School" text higher up. It just doesn't look right there

I know, on my past recent catalogue alts, I've been moving things about to give the page an updated look, it put it there cause I wanted it so overlap with the desk, but I still wanted there to be enough distance from the top of the page, so I just stuck it there

[RandomManJay]

*Double Post* :S

Took your advice again and reworked them :P, just added some little touches:


http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Room-1.png
Link: http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Room-1.png (http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Room-1.png)


http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Catalogue-2.png
Link: http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Catalogue-2.png (http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Catalogue-2.png)

[Agesilaus]

That's really nice, you've made the room fit the furniture and the teacher nicely. It's quite the collection.

[Jamesy]

much better.

[RandomManJay]

That's really nice, you've made the room fit the furniture and the teacher nicely. It's quite the collection.

I actually was gonna add another thing, but I could edit it cause it had been longer than 15 minutes :S, so here it is :P (No point in having the full alt)

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/RasputenTaru/Dunce.png

[Jamesy]

Don't like the dunce hat to be honest. Don't look positioned right. (I am never happy amirite?)

[CrazyColaist]

really nice ;]

lmao at the board

2+2=5

[Agesilaus]

Lmao, the idea is cool. You might want to make it fit his head a bit better, though. =]

[RandomManJay]

It was just an idea I had at the spur of the moment :P

[Galaxay1]

Its really nice only thing i see slightly wrong is in the cat where you can click the items it seems a bit blurry possibly because you resized?

[RandomManJay]

Its really nice only thing i see slightly wrong is in the cat where you can click the items it seems a bit blurry possibly because you resized?

Yeah I said I resized them when I started the thread

[Galaxay1]

Ah right, other than it looks great :)

[Nexdana.com]

i saw this on your alt website

excellent work +rep :)

[jackass]

I like this quite a lot.

8/10. (:

[Luke]

nice, wd +rep :P

[edible]

wow, this is really good.
well done :]

[today]

Wow, thats proper fit

[Earthquake]

Really good work +Rep.

[RandomManJay]

Thanks all for you replys and Rep :P

[:odey:]

Thanks for taking my advice<3

ITs now 10/10 +Rep<3

[=gamemaster=]

Very nice, The doorbell rope is a bit dodgey and one of the corners on the board as well! Other than that, brilliant +rep!

(BTW if youve posted a newer version i havnt looked and *Removed* lolz :P)

EDIT: CANT REP YOU SORRY :(

Edited by Galaxay (Forum Moderator): Please don't avoid the filter.

[RandomManJay]

Very nice, The doorbell rope is a bit dodgey and one of the corners on the board as well! Other than that, brilliant +rep!

(BTW if youve posted a newer version i havnt looked and *Removed* lolz :P)

EDIT: CANT REP YOU SORRY :(

I have made a more recent one with the errors fixed, but I haven't posted it, its only really 2 errors and you can hardly notice them

[GhostFace-]

LOL 2+2=5 xD

gd alt 9/10

[RandomManJay]

LOL 2+2=5 xD

gd alt 9/10


I'm gonna make a t-shirt with 2+2=5 on it, it just seems so cool XD!

[Shawnstra]

The students are facing the wrong way, because the teacher is by the side and the board too :P Sorry if i'm wrong. Anyway great alt, nice furniture, i'd say 9/10

[RandomManJay]

The students are facing the wrong way, because the teacher is by the side and the board too :P Sorry if i'm wrong. Anyway great alt, nice furniture, i'd say 9/10

Its just an example :P I could put them the right way, I might do, but probably wont, anyways the 2 that are on the far left are a bit preoccupied :P