Me other ghetto poem

[:Jakey]

sup blud
your willy's small
we need a microscope
to see little paul

i luv to put my finger
up my bum
but i dont do it
her name is your mum

i like the tweenies
nd big weeners too
and sometimes i even
eat my own poo

i am so ghetto
i am so fly
i dunno why people
wish i would die

i have 3 testes
would you like too see?
hang on brb
cause i need a weeeeeee
WORD YO

[Chadwick]

Save it for the bedroom m8.

[Browney]

BRAP BRAP. We just got merked.

[FlyingJesus]

fail. attempting to make fun of rap when you clearly know nothing about it never works (or when you do for that matter), and if that wasnt the idea then its still crap

[whoooosh]

thats deep

[MusicPalace]

uhh...I hope you weren't being serious?
And if It was meant to be funny...

well frankly...It's really disgusting.
:P

uhm...good rhyming?

[iTechnical]

I lolled.

[zeJosh]

Another hopless comment iTech.

Was the poem meant for comedy, to make us laugh?
I do believe that the poem is a pathetic attempt for attention
and that you should never attempt to write again
unless you are being deadly serious and that a life matters on it.

- Josh :D