Alpine Heights [Public Room]

[brodeo]

Half a day of painstaking work, i hope you like it.
I don't think there are any errors, if there is they can't be that huge or i would have noticed. Thanks anyhoot if you spot them.

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/1299/icegifye0.gif

[HaboCola]

Very nice 9/10

[brodeo]

Very nice 9/10

How could it be improved for 10?

[spot.]

make it less crappy is my guess

[brodeo]

make it less crappy is my guess

Cheers, I'll keep that in mind.

[mat64]

That's pretty nice :). I'm no pixel artist but there's a few things which don't look quite right to me. One thing I'd say the windows look abit off, Like I said I'm not a pixel artist so I can't give you any suggestions how to go about it but perhaps try toning down the colour on them abit? I'm not too sure I might just be abit picky with that. Nice work though :).

[brodeo]

That's pretty nice :). I'm no pixel artist but there's a few things which don't look quite right to me. One thing I'd say the windows look abit off, Like I said I'm not a pixel artist so I can't give you any suggestions how to go about it but perhaps try toning down the colour on them abit? I'm not too sure I might just be abit picky with that. Nice work though :).

I guess you could be right, but i pretty much took them from the Sun terrace public room.

[mat64]

I guess you could be right, but i pretty much took them from the Sun terrace public room.

Ah right, Well like I said that's probley just me been abit picky. It has been a while since I've been on Habbo anyway :).

[jackass]

I really like this.

Nice work. 8/10. (:

(Improving; Add some of your own things, like snowball cannons, air strike dropping snowballs. A castle instead of a sun terrace building etc.) Stuff like that could make it up to a 9/10 or 10/10. I have made many alts in my past, and looked at loads, and only a few of others have I rated 10/10. Maybe one or two.

Hope that helps! +Rep! :8

[brodeo]

I really like this.

Nice work. 8/10. (:

(Improving; Add some of your own things, like snowball cannons, air strike dropping snowballs. A castle instead of a sun terrace building etc.) Stuff like that could make it up to a 9/10 or 10/10. I have made many alts in my past, and looked at loads, and only a few of others have I rated 10/10. Maybe one or two.

Hope that helps! +Rep! :8

Thanks for the comments. And really the only thing i used from the sun terrace were the windows and the colour, thats it.

[Shawnstra]

I love it! No pixel errors I can see, 9/10

[Mashi]

Theres 2 Pixel Errors But 9.5/10 Because thats about 800x600=a lot of pixels = 6 or 7 individual out of a lot is very good. Ill Zoom And Post In a Moment.

I Think The Errors Are intentional So 10/10

[brodeo]

Thanks for that :)

[Beau]

Very nice! One question however; what's with the part at the top? Does that extend into another screen (like Swimming Pool) or what? It's kinda pointless on its own, IMO.

[ExtraKen]

:O I like this

only why is there a random black line above the cave enterance thingy...

[brodeo]

:O I like this

only why is there a random black line above the cave enterance thingy...

It looked a bit rubbishy without it, i don't knowww. Maybe it would look better with a dark blue one.

[@xP]

Very nice. 8/10 :)

[Chippiewill]

10/10 very good on such a large scale

[ItsDave]

I really enjoy it. Nice simple piece of artwork. +rep 10/10

[Agesilaus]

Mate, that is excellent!

10/10 + REP!

[@xP]

thats is very very good.

i realy like it wd. :8

[brodeo]

Thanks for the comments.

[Sodom]

Yeah, I'm with Bio, 8/10. It has good tile placement but it's mostly chops from other scenes, which is still okay. It needs more of your own stuff though. +rep.

[StripedTiger]

wow i love this alt :) snowstorm is my fav game :P hehe

+rep

[brodeo]

Thanks for the comments.

[:alteration]

**** all these noobs saying "9/10" or "crappy" what the ****?!?!?!

This is so good, if it was in habbo i wouldn't even notice it wasn't made by habbo!!!!!!! you rock!!!!!!!! keep on truckin :-)

:alteration

+REP +REP +REP

[Alkaz]

I really like it but i feel a bit more height could be added to it and like a pine forest or soemthing?

[=Jen=]

I have NO clue what Alpine Heights is.
BUT.
It's very nice.
10/10 and rep, dear.

[Calisse]

you can tell alot of effort was put in, so thats a great start, alot of effort is always something i look for and appreciate...

+ I love the little coats, they work, you can tell what theyre meant to be, and they work from all the shown angles. love them.

+ i like the little machine thing, i dunno what it is, but i like it :]

+ the snow splats on the wall are awesome (but where are they coming from, no ones throwing snow (although two people look like they are about to) and wouldnt they of melted otherwise?

+ love the way snow builds up against walls.

thoughts for improvement...

the guy with his head buried, when you first look at it im thinking *wth is happening?* so maybe make it shaded so it looks like theres a lump, its flat at the moment so it looks like he has no head, do you see what i mean?

the logs, i think they should be thicker, just my personal opinion, thinkin of it logically theyre about the same pixel width as a habbo arm in your alt, log = arm in real life wouldnt be thick enough to store for winter.

the wooden bridges, add another colour in the wood pattern i think would make it look better.

the snow on the roof is good, but on first impression you dont realise its the roof, you think your looking behind the building. perhaps put a chimney up, that would be seasonal :]

trees, perhaps have some of them have tiny bits of greenery showing? I also think, like the bridges, they should have a third colour for shading. the dark on the underside of the trees should have another slightly darker colour, i think.

the little guy bottom left, i dont know what hes doing, it would be really cool if he had a slice of silver on the bottom of his shoe, to make it look like hes skating...

the patch of ice for skating is too formulated, remove some of the lines and perhaps put a skater on it.




generally i think its awesome, and give it a 7/10 <3 x

[brodeo]

you can tell alot of effort was put in, so thats a great start, alot of effort is always something i look for and appreciate...

thoughts for improvement...

1. the guy with his head buried, when you first look at it im thinking *wth is happening?* so maybe make it shaded so it looks like theres a lump, its flat at the moment so it looks like he has no head, do you see what i mean?

2. the logs, i think they should be thicker, just my personal opinion, thinkin of it logically theyre about the same pixel width as a habbo arm in your alt, log = arm in real life wouldnt be thick enough to store for winter.

3. the wooden bridges, add another colour in the wood pattern i think would make it look better.

4. the snow on the roof is good, but on first impression you dont realise its the roof, you think your looking behind the building. perhaps put a chimney up, that would be seasonal :]

5. trees, perhaps have some of them have tiny bits of greenery showing? I also think, like the bridges, they should have a third colour for shading. the dark on the underside of the trees should have another slightly darker colour, i think.

6. the little guy bottom left, i dont know what hes doing, it would be really cool if he had a slice of silver on the bottom of his shoe, to make it look like hes skating...


1. Copied from Snowstorm.
2. Copied from Picnic Area.
3. Copied from Snowstorm.
4. I think there is a chimney.
5. Again, copied from Snowstorm.
6. Just my Habbo.

Cheerss x

[Hatsen]

9/10 + rep.
The image is beautiful! But the water doesn't look like ice, and that looks strange.

[Crocadillian]

Loving it, 9/10

[PaulMacC]

Excellent as usual

[brodeo]

Thanks very much for all the comments.

[Philip!]

Really good and christmassssy. It is a bit plain though :[
8/10

[Pentridge]

one of best alts ive seen all day