Media work

[Callum.]

Right, for a peice of homework we had to do two adverts, i've done the first one with ease, but the second one I'm not sure if i'll get a bollocking for.

"The second advert will be targeting the chocolate bar at a completly different audience and will be found in NUTS magazine - a magazine aimed at men in their twenties who are intrested in humour, sports and women."

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4071/mediayg6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Will it be allowed do you think? I think it's quite good, accept the quality, but it's saved on paint, and I dont know any other way I can save without quality loss.

Thanks.

[Stephen]

LOLOLOL my teacher would steal it and show it to all the teachers in the staffroom.

Also can't you atleast put a bit of chocolate on there? Even if its poo coming out of her ****

[dirrty]

i dont think it would be allowed. well it wouldnt be allowed at my college anyway.

[RandomManJay]

Right, for a peice of homework we had to do two adverts, i've done the first one with ease, but the second one I'm not sure if i'll get a bollocking for.

"The second advert will be targeting the chocolate bar at a completly different audience and will be found in NUTS magazine - a magazine aimed at men in their twenties who are intrested in humour, sports and women."

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4071/mediayg6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Will it be allowed do you think? I think it's quite good, accept the quality, but it's saved on paint, and I dont know any other way I can save without quality loss.

Thanks.

Even though it does show that in a state of mind, if you eat that chocolate, you will get a fit woman taking her bakini off :P, it depends on what your teachers like, if it was my teacher, she would say I'm perverted or I'm immature or something like that in the funny, sly, sarcastic way she is, but make another and take it with you, and if you do get told off, just say you weren't sure so you made another as well just in case :P

(I'm doing Media Studies at A-level, we do really wocked things in our lessons (always fun XD!)

[Callum.]

LOLOLOL my teacher would steal it and show it to all the teachers in the staffroom.

Also can't you atleast put a bit of chocolate on there? Even if its poo coming out of her ****


I might try to add some, but I cant find any decent looking chocolate that fits well.


i dont think it would be allowed. well it wouldnt be allowed at my college anyway.

I'll just say that I'm mature enough to handle the material I think. I think it's a good ad, pretty original tbh, everyone else in my class done football lol.

[5,5]

Depends on how your teachers sense of humuor is and how much you can joke around with them.

[Callum.]

Even though it does show that in a state of mind, if you eat that chocolate, you will get a fit woman taking her bakini off :P, it depends on what your teachers like, if it was my teacher, she would say I'm perverted or I'm immature or something like that in the funny, sly, sarcastic way she is, but make another and take it with you, and if you do get told off, just say you weren't sure so you made another as well just in case :P

(I'm doing Media Studies at A-level, we do really wocked things in our lessons (always fun XD!)

Thanks for that :). I'm not going to make another, because it's a decent ad for a 2 minute job. I'm mature enough to handle it but yeah, thanks. I want to do Media A-level!


Depends on how your teachers sense of humuor is and how much you can joke around with them.

Yeah I guess.

[RandomManJay]

I might try to add some, but I cant find any decent looking chocolate that fits well.



I'll just say that I'm mature enough to handle the material I think. I think it's a good ad, pretty original tbh, everyone else in my class done football lol.

If you can, try and make a waterfall of chocolate behind her, like a background, that will improve the purpose the ad is trying to achieve

[dirrty]

ask for teacher first before you do it. because if the teacher is like "sorry i wont accept that" then you did all that work for no reason.

[Callum.]

ask for teacher first before you do it. because if the teacher is like "sorry i wont accept that" then you did all that work for no reason.

Thanks, but i've thought about it and I'll just give it in.

+rep to all helpers :).

[&]

I quite like that actually.
Id bring the line spacinh on the right hand side down a little.

[Neversoft]

Well in my college that would be allowed. I'm sure my teacher would love it. :P

If you have a male teacher I don't think he'll mind.

[Jamesy]

Right, for a peice of homework we had to do two adverts, i've done the first one with ease, but the second one I'm not sure if i'll get a bollocking for.

"The second advert will be targeting the chocolate bar at a completly different audience and will be found in NUTS magazine - a magazine aimed at men in their twenties who are intrested in humour, sports and women."

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4071/mediayg6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Will it be allowed do you think? I think it's quite good, accept the quality, but it's saved on paint, and I dont know any other way I can save without quality loss.

Thanks.

Quote because we need to see it again. I beleive it is marked whether it follows the ASA code, so you could research it a bit and if he says it isn't allowed say that it is within the ASA code. I think it would be allowed, in real advertising perhaps. But not very likely...

[myke]

It's allowed I'm sure, because in my school they had a porn mag, isn't it like FTN?? Or something and I asked mi media teacher and she said "I asked the newsagent and she said it's ok, it's not under the porn section, it's a soft-porn and people your age can look at it, it shows different camera shots" so I think it's okay, to make it better why not put a background like this:
http://www.pralinette.com/Graphics/Wallpaper01_1280x1024.jpg I think it's good :)

Oh and try and put some style into the font.