English Coursework - Original Writing.

[Zuar]

I don't really like it but yeah, rate it and suggest improvements?
Also I need a title, if anyone can think of one :)


*removed*
incase i get done for plagrism

[brapp]

if that's gcse coursework, i wouldn't post it on here 'cause they search the first few lines or w/e and you'll probs get done for plagarism.

[chilloutrich]

whats this for, gcse, a level?