First Alt: Youth CCTV [irJack]

[irJack]

This is my first alt.
please */10
And how I can improve.
I know its not perfect, and the wall on the cctv room
is meant to be open so u can see :D

thx

http://i24.tinypic.com/wbypzs.png

[O]

The CCTV room doesnt look real but nice try :] & 7/10

[irJack]

Thx :D

[irJack]

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Edited by Yoshimitsui (Super Moderator): Do NOT ask for reputation.

[GreenCrayons.]

Me Like ^_^
Espext the cctv should be outside the actual room because they are gunna kind of know it there is a big block in the corner of the room :P
+Rep well done!

[irJack]

Me Like ^_^
Espext the cctv should be outside the actual room because they are gunna kind of know it there is a big block in the corner of the room :P
+Rep well done!

thanks at least its constructive criticism. :D