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KrimeScene
12-11-2007, 06:32 PM
cudnt edit lst post
so here is new one.

/10 pls.

http://i17.tinypic.com/872h8gp.png

mousey
12-11-2007, 06:40 PM
Ticket machine to bright, houses an train are to small, and im sure ive seen them before

Red arrow to birhgt

also ranmp with road looks like the conreate next to it is digonal aswell


5/10 so far

Spy,
12-11-2007, 06:41 PM
i like it maybe add some trees? pixel errors on the left arrow maybe make the ticket thing a bit darker green

BlueTango
12-11-2007, 06:44 PM
Roflmao!! Thats Excellent !!!

Well done.

KrimeScene
12-11-2007, 06:47 PM
Thanks:D

jackass
12-11-2007, 06:58 PM
Text done with a generator, a lot of C&P, change of colour scheme.

But I like how its put together. 5/10. :)

Xooley
12-11-2007, 07:46 PM
6/10 the red arrow is to big..

Kalk
12-11-2007, 07:57 PM
cudnt edit lst post
so here is new one.

/10 pls.

http://i17.tinypic.com/872h8gp.png

Look at the hotel door. Then compare it with the size of the ticket machine.. Maybe scale it all down? :)

Agesilaus
12-11-2007, 08:17 PM
That's an excellent improvement. I like the add-ons. =]

9/10

KrimeScene
12-11-2007, 08:36 PM
That's an excellent improvement. I like the add-ons. =]

9/10

Thanks :D

@xP
12-11-2007, 08:58 PM
nice try however the enrance to the carpark i not isometric.
apart from that good effort.

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