3rd alt (getting better)

[Dobby626]

http://habboxforum.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=19845&stc=1&d=1189830520 my 3rd alteration. Its supposed to be some army medic guy.
I think im improving... only took me like an hour lol,
well, give me feedback on weather you think, and tell me what I need to improve. :eusa_danc

if that is too blurry, try this 1:
http://i14.tinypic.com/6twvlag.png

[KrimeScene]

An hour?

Thats bad 5/10

Edited by opensourcehost (Forum Super Moderator): Please try to make constructive comments.

[Agesilaus]

It's alright, the green on the hat is a bit bright in my opinion, but you've done good.

6/10