My First alt : Luggage Scanner

[:Firefox]

Heya all, this is my very first alt, quite basic but tell me what you think please. Thanks :) http://rapidshare.de/files/2020438/Luggage_Scanner.PNG.html

[Legend-Killa]

Uhh it comes up to some internet hoster in a different language i think?

[:paschendale:]

the page cannot be displayed

[bigbutsound]

I cannot acess to either..

[Roboevil]

Nor me, and how is it a different language...?

[Surname]

Same here :S

[Evolution]

http://img261.echo.cx/img261/8645/luggagescanner8wt.png

I think it can be improved, very much. It's not bad for a first alt though. 4/10

[Charizard.]

Tis alright. Good for a first alt, 8/10

[stonesey]

not bad, i can see a few pixel errors, but 6/10 for effort

[Jashmine]

it's a good idea xD
Could be a little better, but it's really good for a first alt.
7/10

[Roboevil]

As before ^, It is good for a first, ned's improving, shading, texturing and straightening but apart from that it's phunky. 6/10

[SilverDino]

If Its A First Alt It's Good.But There Are Loads Of Pixel Errors And No Shading At All.Erm.....I Can't Think Of A Rate.Lol.5/10.

[Y!]

Not at it's best 7/10 if you can improve the few errors I found I will change my rating to 9/10.

[Noble]

It's okay.. try reshaping some of it though, some more shading wouldn't hit a miss. 7/10.

[Yayse]

its a good idea, but a little more shading and perhaps you could join the rollers up more, to make it look more smooth and more like one object, not two. other than that, brilliant work for a first alt :D

[Raza786]

I Know How You Made That You Got 2 Rollers Joined Together Took A Screenie Put It There Then The Next Bit You Took The Pura Fridge And Made It Silver Then Cut It In Half Then Drawed The Other Bits So 110 Plus No Shading At All And The Shape Can Be Better And A Few Errors To Be Looked At And The 1 Is For First Alt Good Thiniking.

[jammy06]

i cant see it lmao

[!:Joe:!]

It is quite good, i think you should have used a roller at the back to but changed the conveyor belt to some rollers that your luggge ends up on if that makes sense :s