Graphics Direct -

[Coldplay]

Developed it a bit more - Didn't want to bump the old thread.

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d71/runeboy13/GraphicsDirectcopy-2.png (http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d71/runeboy13/GraphicsDirectcopy-2.png)


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[Jamesy]

I've said it in the other thread but you were probably busy :), I think it looks to small, the content box. Seems so squashed...

[Coldplay]

When I code it it will be expandable :) thats why it's like that. I can change it if you like.

[iHubz]

If I am honest, tis HORRID!

Get rid of it

[Jamesy]

Fair enough. I would say make it a bit bigger to show what it will look like when it's expanded :)

[Coldplay]

If I am honest, tis HORRID!

Get rid of it

-Rep, Constructive Criticisim only.

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d71/runeboy13/GraphicsDirect-4.png
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[iTechnical]

Darren, honestely, he's tried.

As many of us have said in previous theads,
the content page is a tad too small
and the big text on the banner is eww.

It's starting to look really good +rep

[Jamesy]

Agreed with iTech.

I know how hard it is to make a decent-ish layout, hell I tried 5 times :D

[Coldplay]

Returned iTech, Thanks.

[Jamesy]

Make the text on the topc userbar white. I think that will look nice. The text won't be gradiented up there when you code it anyway. (unless it's an image which is cheating ;))

[Coldplay]

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d71/runeboy13/GraphicsDirect-5.png
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[Jamesy]

That looks A LOT better. Seriously. Sometimes it's best to go back to basics. Do the same for the text on the bottom bar. And perhaps the nav and content bar. I don't know how they will look though.

[iHubz]

Better than what is was, but still unproffesional and horrid. Sorry, but just look at it.

Also no need for the -Rep. I am giving you my honest, professional, graphic designer opinion.

[iTechnical]

If I am honest, tis HORRID!

Get rid of it

That's professional?
Honestely Darren it's his first atttempt.
Just leave him alone.

[Dentafrice,]

It hurts my eyes.. too much blue and black for me. If you have too much, it just ends up looking all blurry and all you see is blue and black.

http://www.colourlovers.com/

Try that site and pick a nice palette :]

[JK]

Sorry but that is awful, You should pay someone to make you one, Beceause by the looks of that layout you aernt a very good designer

[iTechnical]

it's his first try.

[Coldplay]

First site I ever made. Im building up my skills as this is the career I want to go into.

[Jamesy]

I would say make every bit of text, except the banner and main content (white background anyway obv :rolleyes:)

On the buttons etc.

[Coldplay]

I did, It looks bad on the content title and stuff, The site map looks better though.

[Jamesy]

Ok :D . . .

[abnormal]

i like that!
vnice. :D