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mousey
19-11-2007, 09:02 PM
As we all know cartoonamatic is being changed thus calling for a new layout, i have just finished it so what you think...

3 styles (green needs a few tweeks)


Orange


http://i5.tinypic.com/8etruk0.png


Green

http://i3.tinypic.com/8dzpjq1.png



Pink


http://i7.tinypic.com/6la8nz6.png






Rate 'n Slate

iTechnical
19-11-2007, 09:03 PM
As i've said fonts here & there look a bit dodgey but 10/10

Samishlol
19-11-2007, 09:03 PM
Nice effort.

Jaysir
19-11-2007, 09:03 PM
Um, The boxes aren't align, you don't have to align them.. But it might look nicer if they were ;]

Invent
19-11-2007, 09:03 PM
10/10?!?!?!?

That's worth a 4/10 sorry.

iTechnical
19-11-2007, 09:04 PM
Explain why Simon :)

Invent
19-11-2007, 09:06 PM
If I must:

- Overall design is bad, its just 4 boxes? Barely any style on them as well (just a drop shadow or two).
- Text is appalling
- Far too simple
- Shows nothing to give it a better mark than 4/10..

iTechnical
19-11-2007, 09:08 PM
The main plans for Cartoonamatic layout is too have pop' flash moves on the main content box, with daily comics int he nav bar.

The flash portal upload etc, blog, chat system will be in a popup window.

mousey
19-11-2007, 09:33 PM
Its had a face lift lol - yes a spelt 'rejester' wrong its register :p

http://i9.tinypic.com/7x8n82c.png

dannyisnotamazing
19-11-2007, 09:42 PM
10/10?!?!?!?

That's worth a 4/10 sorry.

He works for them or is something to do with them, also he's an idiot thats the reason for 10/10. :P

Also I reallllly dislike it, the font shouldn't be that size- thats what it looks like and the colours are horrible.. the navigation text is also stupid and disgusting

mousey
19-11-2007, 09:49 PM
I'm not sure what font to use any ideas?

Jamesy
19-11-2007, 09:52 PM
I'm not sure what font to use any ideas?

I personally like Trenchbut MS

Samishlol
19-11-2007, 09:53 PM
Okay guys i know you think its disguesting and that but give Tom tips on how to improve instead of just saying "eww its crap"

iTechnical
19-11-2007, 09:55 PM
Agree'd with above.
And I own Cartoonamatic, reason I gave 10, because he worked quite hard on it. >_>

mousey
19-11-2007, 09:56 PM
Thanks Sam i was like how o you know my name :O then i remembered its in my sig and i think ive got your msn ???

anyways isuck yeah that font is awsome im using it, its smart - anyones whos on the team the cake has been crumbled, it had icing on :o

http://i14.tinypic.com/8ehtmw1.png

Jamesy
19-11-2007, 10:01 PM
:D

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iTechnical
19-11-2007, 10:02 PM
Anyhoo.
Fonts getting there slowly.

chrisgocrazyH
20-11-2007, 10:53 AM
Its had a face lift lol - yes a spelt 'rejester' wrong its register :p

http://i9.tinypic.com/7x8n82c.png



NICE :D :D but CHANGE FONTS or u are gonna fail ouda wise

Jamesy
20-11-2007, 04:25 PM
Mousy if you could let me have a PSD of it I could take a stab at it.

craigg.
20-11-2007, 04:31 PM
The font is better, but you still havent changed all of the fonts. *gets on the floor and begs for you to change the text* I will be sick if you keep that font. Use a nice font, a font which everyone has on their OS, it will save the use images and will load your site faster. It's OK, not the best layout i've seen, not the worst neither. Add a bit of dummy text/images so I can see what the end result will look like, then I can give you further guidence.

Jamesy
20-11-2007, 04:37 PM
I hate the colours. I hate the orange I hate the green and what the hell is with the pink?

Neutrals and smooth colours are best in my opinion for a website.

iHubz
20-11-2007, 05:19 PM
And after seeing the above template I left the business as a graphics designer after seeing the sort of rubbish that the team are producing.

iTechnical
20-11-2007, 05:31 PM
Darren, I had fired you long before it.

Awfy
20-11-2007, 05:58 PM
That is bloody awful. Colours are bad, fonts are bad, shadows are bad, structure is bad. There isn't 1 thing good about it.

So 0/10 from me.

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