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Saosin
20-11-2007, 10:30 PM
only just found it. tell me what you think -




we met at the beginning of the year
became amazing friends
something was felt between us
this went on for weeks

endless times we attempted to meet
every time but one never happened
that day we did meet, was an amazing day
i'll never forget it.

walking me home in the rain
we didn't talk much
our nerves were bigger than our mouths
but then it all changed

you tore my heart
smashed my dreams
all my thoughts came tumbling down on me
i thought you were my one
but looks like we're through and done

you said you spoke to your real dad
first time in years
i tried to help you out
looks like you had your doubt

we didn't speak for a while
but when we did, tension was there
beating us up, in our own air

i felt like your rebound boy
something in between
now you're with your old boyfriend
seems to me it was all pretend

you tore my heart
smashed my dreams
all my thoughts came tumbling down on me
i thought you were my one
but looks like we're through and done

you tore my heart
smashed my dreams
all my thoughts came tumbling down on me
i thought you were my one
but looks like we're through and done

Now I see you at school
we just look at eachother, not even a smile is there
there just seems to much tension in the air
your gay annoying emo friend
thinks she's cool
walking around the corridors, at school

giving me these evils, rude words aswell
i just wish she would die, and rot in hell
this isn't what I wanted
for me and you
you said we were friends
how much of that bull**** was true?

Cypher-
20-11-2007, 10:33 PM
cant determine much just on lyrics, do you have it done with some sound?

Saosin
20-11-2007, 10:37 PM
nope.

i got nothing to record drums with etc.

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