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Plixor
27-11-2007, 03:18 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/9538/rampekw8.png


any comments? :)

GrebSkeb
27-11-2007, 03:39 PM
;o you ripped a alt! Jks
Its very nice id say bout 7/10

Plixor
27-11-2007, 03:43 PM
Please, dont say im a ripper, when you cant prove it.. I didnt rip?

Describe
27-11-2007, 03:52 PM
He then said he was Joking.
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Alts alright but the wrong colour.

Plixor
27-11-2007, 03:56 PM
thought it was like JIKES, uno.. sorry! my bad!
im danish, dont understand all the shortenings, sorry!

GrebSkeb
27-11-2007, 03:59 PM
oh ok sorry

Describe
27-11-2007, 03:59 PM
Its alright im sure. :8
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Maybe you should change the colour as ive said before and add more textures.

-Xiangu-
27-11-2007, 03:59 PM
lol cool a danish person, i like the ramp well done

Sodom
27-11-2007, 04:26 PM
Specular is correct, and I like the curve. But make it flat in the middle a little more than it is now, maybe one more tile's-worth. Also put up a sign along the length of it on the back someplace. Detail the hell out of the woodgrain, too.

roaddemon
27-11-2007, 05:38 PM
Yeah, my agreement with sodom, its good but the wood is just..

PLain o.O

@xP
27-11-2007, 06:18 PM
nice, i've seen this on Habbos.net

Calisse
27-11-2007, 06:51 PM
Its okay, its not a good colour though, most half pipes are stone where im from lol or wood...


anyway

Needs shading on the inner bit <3

5/10

Everlong
27-11-2007, 08:33 PM
I like it, could do with some shading on on the curve but i know how hard it is to get right + rep

Edit: i owe you rep.

Plixor
27-11-2007, 08:46 PM
I'd also posted it on habbos.net, yes.

Actually theres shading in the "curve", made it in photoshop, you almost cant spot it

Everlong
27-11-2007, 08:48 PM
I can kind of see the shading it looks like its only on one side though instead of adding definition to the curve.

Calisse
27-11-2007, 09:56 PM
if the shadings so subtle that it looks like theirs no shading, theres something wrong with the shading..

Plixor
27-11-2007, 10:14 PM
Well.. Im going to do a kinda huge skatepark, so ill change the shading and take the other critics to it :)

You'll def. see more to this project-thing :)

zeJosh
27-11-2007, 10:42 PM
Good luck ont he project

Plixor
28-11-2007, 01:24 PM
thnks :eusa_danc

Philip!
28-11-2007, 03:35 PM
Add more shading and wood effects, I like the curve but try adding stickers or graffitti on the back, something to bring it to life :)
7/10

ItsDave
28-11-2007, 04:46 PM
make it so it looks like its bendy in shading. 8/10

Boonzeet
28-11-2007, 05:11 PM
Um the curve of the ramp should have a flow of shades, not just one tone.

.:Sindrolic:.
28-11-2007, 09:18 PM
Nice work on the shading on the side of the ramp I like it.
And Lars Ulrich is Danish so you must be cool :D

Crocadillian
29-11-2007, 12:04 AM
Nice ALT, i think it could do with more detail and a bit more refining bot good work, 7/10

PaulMacC
29-11-2007, 12:26 AM
I can tell you being a pixel artists angles like that are TOUGH!
Very nicely done and cant see any errors.
9/10 WELL DONE! :eusa_clap

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