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X-terminate
30-11-2007, 06:30 PM
A PC with keyboard, LCD flat screen monitor, mouse, surround sound speakers and mouse mat. This took about a couple of days to complete. Rate /10 and C+C.






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jesus
30-11-2007, 06:36 PM
the case looks massive compared to the rest

-Xiangu-
30-11-2007, 06:45 PM
yeh make pc tower smaller :) the tower is like "hey who wants to put our vynals in here?

.:Sindrolic:.
30-11-2007, 11:04 PM
Its alright. The mouse looks like its part of the mouse pad and its really flat so you may needa add more shading too it. I give it a 7.5 to 8 outa 10 cant decide xD

Alan_Carr
30-11-2007, 11:48 PM
Quite nice :)
Maybe adjust the sizes of the objects, i.e. the mousemat looks too big..
Nice effort though, with a bit more improvement, could be VERY GOOD.
8.5/10 :)

=Jen=
01-12-2007, 01:14 AM
The mouse sucks.
And there is no cords.
=]
Otherwise.
GREAT!
8/10.

Mia-leigh
01-12-2007, 03:47 AM
I Didn`t Even Notice That Was A Mouse Haha..

Uhhm Good Tho :)

8 / 10 !!

Jamesy
01-12-2007, 09:11 AM
Everything but the mouse, keyboard and Tower look good.

Those three look crap. Mouse needs to be more 3d. Use shading to get that effect. Tower needs to be smaller. Keyboard needs to be less like a grid. Try using your own keyboard as reference.

Another suggestion is make it not all so square. Round some edges like most pc's are.

Implosion
01-12-2007, 09:55 AM
The mouse sucks.
And there is no cords.
=]
Otherwise.
GREAT!
8/10.

Called Wireless Keyboard and Mouse. :P

Tower is way too big.

9/10

Agesilaus
01-12-2007, 11:42 PM
The mouse is a bit flat, try to make that a bit more blown up.

it just needs a bit more detail in general, but I think you've done pretty good.

8/10

Pentridge
04-12-2007, 11:40 PM
bit to simple

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