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Dalk
07-12-2007, 05:55 PM
This took me about 20/30 mins, it is for part of a room, but i thought it turned out pretty well. So I decided to post it. Please rate /10 and leave comments on how to improve. Thanks!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee168/dalk_habbo/Cabinet-1.png

mousey
07-12-2007, 06:11 PM
Loads of errors and big ones its deformed tbh retry the inside - 5/10

Dalk
07-12-2007, 06:16 PM
errors like what? and you dont have to be so rude

Everlong
07-12-2007, 06:25 PM
I like the shading on the draws and the draw that is pulled out looks good. i think the glass door thing needs to be thicker and the inside looks a bit weird i think its a colouring error, other than that a its good :)

Smits
07-12-2007, 06:26 PM
The inside looks like ti goes all the way to the floor butt hen how are all those drawers there?

Dalk
07-12-2007, 06:27 PM
Thanks Everlong

Rhiz
07-12-2007, 06:28 PM
i can see why people are getting confused on it,
you should've done it so BOTH the doors were open
but if you look carefully there's one shelf that goes across and it's just a normal depth cabinet with drawers underneath, one glass door open, one shut.

looks good but it's a bit confusing to look at, 7/10 (:

Dalk
07-12-2007, 07:02 PM
I slightly changed it according to the comments, please comment on the new one and i know is not perfect so please leave improvements

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee168/dalk_habbo/Cabinet-2.png

Everlong
07-12-2007, 07:06 PM
Its much better :) +rep

Dalk
07-12-2007, 07:08 PM
:D thanks again!

Rhiz
07-12-2007, 07:14 PM
I slightly changed it according to the comments, please comment on the new one and i know is not perfect so please leave improvements

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee168/dalk_habbo/Cabinet-2.png

ok got permission to so,
http://i6.tinypic.com/8aelhdd.png

just editted the bits that were bugging me like where the start of the doors are, the drawer and the tones inside the cabinet.

yours was probs better tho rofl

ItsDave
07-12-2007, 08:51 PM
I slightly changed it according to the comments, please comment on the new one and i know is not perfect so please leave improvements

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee168/dalk_habbo/Cabinet-2.png

I prefer this one

Alan_Carr
07-12-2007, 08:53 PM
Good effort :)

jackass
07-12-2007, 09:17 PM
Its okay I guess. Seen better. 6/10.

Philip!
07-12-2007, 10:23 PM
Good shading etc. The glass effect is really good but I agree there is loads of weird bits - Nice attempt for a 20/30 min Job.

Kyle
07-12-2007, 11:14 PM
errors like what? and you dont have to be so rude

He wasn't being rude, and I do recall you asking for comments? so please don't moan at him for doing as you say.:rolleyes:

IMO the glass on the doors isn't 'glassy' enough :S

lAdmire
08-12-2007, 12:20 AM
That's amazing. 10/10.

Agesilaus
08-12-2007, 07:11 AM
Looks great and an good improvement there too. However, the doors look a bit 2Dish, try to make them a bit more blown up.

7/10

RandomManJay
08-12-2007, 08:52 AM
Good (Looking at second attempt), try making the doors, box and drawer a little more 3D, theyre just lines so it doesn't look right

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