MY First layout i worked on

[LegendOfNoob]

worked on this off and on i have had it finished but no one will code i didnt see a good section so this is besically asking for suggestions + asking if anyone can/will code it for me i do not have anything uk so possibly for free
or give me like a tut

(Open Spoiler)
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t137/LegendOfNoob/LAYOUTPREVIEW.gif
Yes im too lazy to blur it cause too easy to steal

[Ini]

whats with the random spray bits?

[LegendOfNoob]

it was snow flake i blured in under a iced effect like looking at a frozen pond

[RedCrisps]

take away the random spray bits.
make the black line 1px
use colourlovers.com to find some colour, never use the ms paint ones.
remember to put a shade on the boxes, or it will look nothing like a habbo layout

[RSTurbo]

LOL.
WHO WOULD WANT TO STEAL THAT :|

[Samishlol]

Tbh it's not that good. But good try

[Zaub]

It doesn't look very good.. Good layouts just aren't supposed to be made in Paint.

[Minstrels]

It doesn't look very good.. Good layouts just aren't supposed to be made in Paint.
You do see the odd one or two good ones which have been churned out of paint.

[Agesilaus]

It's a good try for your first attempt, but it does need improvements. Try to make it a bit more smoother.

I agree with RedCrisps' suggestions. :)

[LegendOfNoob]

Thanks for advice
got a bit carried away with the ice affect :P
before it was just snow the blue & a white fade on the edges

[RyanPaulNelson]

That's well ill man it's cold I want it sell me it please please please PM me with a price and can you please slice it for me so I can upload it to my freewebs!!!!!!!!

[:Edzy]

LOL.
WHO WOULD WANT TO STEAL THAT :|

its his first layout:rolleyes:

[Josh-H]

What the heck, its terrible. The spray bits are just tacky and horrible. The watermark is a little "in your face".

My tips:
- Make sure the tops of your boxes all line up, at the moment they're everywhere.
- Ditch the spray can.
- Change the border thickness.

[--ss--]

worked on this off and on i have had it finished but no one will code i didnt see a good section so this is besically asking for suggestions + asking if anyone can/will code it for me i do not have anything uk so possibly for free
or give me like a tut

(Open Spoiler)
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t137/LegendOfNoob/LAYOUTPREVIEW.gif
Yes im too lazy to blur it cause too easy to steal
Nice attempt but in future make the borders 1px thick and don't use the spraycan , also try adding some colour and images :)

It doesn't look very good.. Good layouts just aren't supposed to be made in Paint.
What are you talking about,the best habbo layouts are usually made on paint.

[RyanPaulNelson]

Well im not hugely good but i can try to slice on the condition of a little credit o and i would like for you to make ur own banner if you will but after all that hmm

$10/5 euros

*due to cash value averages*

He PMed me that :\ lolz =]

[LegendOfNoob]

days ago & basically bumping a old thread? already got new one 10x better from great tips here :) not selling x]

[Romanity]

You can see how the banner was done on paint, as it blurs when saved as .gif... try using a better graphics program. But ive seen worse for 1st try.

[LegendOfNoob]

thanks i didnt do it i had one of my admins .:simpsonfreak:. do it
he used to work for a offical us fansite :)