Final Product: Chocobos World

[Chocobos]

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7446/chocobosworldrecolourdpf7.png

What do you think?

Rate or hate :D

[Plixor]

too plain, and too shiny colours

[Chocobos]

I guess the colours are a little bit shiny, but i didn't want it to seem dull.

I tried not to use the default colours anyway. :D

[Nuka-Cola]

The trees are very good actually abit too good compared to the rest ...

[Chocobos]

The trees are very good actually abit too good compared to the rest ...

Achually as said i C+P'd the trees from hotel view on UK and im kind of annoyed that my alts arent being appriciated, ive only made about 5 alts you know?

[Kyle]

The trees are very good actually abit too good compared to the rest ...

That'd be because they are C+P

most of it is c+p, you've done a few houses and a big factory (a box)

not good imo:$

[Chocobos]

Kyle how good we're you after 5 alts?

i'd like to see your 5th or 6th alt that you made, my first alt was mostly scribbles and i think i have came a long way.

[Stickie]

hmmm a bit basic... nice big building ok... but I wouldnt wanna spend 5 minutes in there, no windows or anything. on the left side of ur building there's no line btw. at the lil pool or w.e it is at the bottom, use lighter dark and make an oval not a circle to make it realistic. another thing I dont get is why u have such big doors in front of the building with a line in between like they can open and then u put 2 small doors at bottom to open. it confuses me. for the rest I gotta go with other comments of u using too bright colors. once you dont that just work it out a bit more.

[Kyle]

Kyle how good we're you after 5 alts?

i'd like to see your 5th or 6th alt that you made, my first alt was mostly scribbles and i think i have came a long way.

What, why are you bringing this back to ME, I'm just commenting on your alt, which you asked for, I never asked for anything back :S

You don't have to be good at alts to tell when not much effort has been put into another alt

fyi, i haven't even made 5 alts, because, I know I am very useless at them, and just don't attempt.:eusa_wall

[Everlong]

The house isn't isometric and i think there are a bit too many trees.

[Kardan]

Some things are out of proportion, and dull the colours down, most are too bright and some are microsoft paint default colours.
Obviously add more detail. 5/10.

[Chocobos]

Karden they arent default, Sorry Kyle but you did sound a little rude to me and im not in the best of moods.

[Fly-boy]

Maybe make it Grey and it will be better....

[Chocobos]

I need to think of what alt to make next. :P

[Boonzeet]

Kyle how good we're you after 5 alts?

i'd like to see your 5th or 6th alt that you made, my first alt was mostly scribbles and i think i have came a long way.

-rep

He gave his bloody opinion. I would say 4/10.



I''m a bit annoyed at the moment


Even if you are annoyed you do not take it out on others.

[Chocobos]

why did you close your RPG?
My Habbo name there was lGoldBar >_>

also -Rep me and ill return it.

He said my alt was all C+P and the building was a box, so he was rude.

[Everlong]

-rep

He gave his bloody opinion. I would say 4/10.



Even if you are annoyed you do not take it out on others.



I agree, im not going to =rep but learn to take C&C.

[Boonzeet]

why did you close your RPG?
My Habbo name there was lGoldBar >_>

also -Rep me and ill return it.

He said my alt was all C+P and the building was a box, so he was rude.

but it is just that :S

I closed because:

Couldn't be ****** to do it anymorew
You and loads of others left
No one was a dedicatee.

[Chocobos]

I can take C&C but not when he posts that its all C+P and basically insults my alt.

[Kyle]

-rep

He gave his bloody opinion. I would say 4/10.



Even if you are annoyed you do not take it out on others.



Thanks ;) +rep


why did you close your RPG?
My Habbo name there was lGoldBar >_>

also -Rep me and ill return it.

He said my alt was all C+P and the building was a box, so he was rude.

Well, that is all it is, c+p, and a few boxes, with bright colours -rep :)

[Everlong]

I can take C&C but not when he posts that its all C+P and basically insults my alt.

Its is though isn't it, everyone has the right to an opinion good or bad.

[PaulMacC]

The houses are erm, bad k, but your improving.
Keep chuggin'

[Chocobos]

wow you -Rep'd me because you don't like my alt.

whatever.

[Moozo]

needs some shading and its a bit.... plain?

[Kyle]

wow you -Rep'd me because you don't like my alt.

whatever.

If you read the comment, you'll see why I -repped you

It's not because I didn't like your alt, I wouldn't -rep someone because of that, It was because your argued with me about my critisism, which, you asked for, so if anyone's to blame, it's you.

[Chocobos]

Whatever, i -Rep'd you back, seriously why cant people give achual C+C Like PaulMc which achually helps me... something like "Not very good, shade it and improve houses" and not "Lol thats just C+P"

Seriously everytime i make an alt i make little rep and on this one i managed to get Three -Rep's see?

[Chocobos]

Karden they arent default, Sorry Kyle but you did sound a little rude to me and im not in the best of moods.

Look at the part where it said SORRY but you can -Rep me all you like, ****.

I just try to do my hardest on making serious alts and get spammed with bad Rep's instead of C+C.

[Kardan]

The blue boxes and water both include the blue default colours. And other colorus are very smiliar to default, it's too bright overall.

[Everlong]

Look at the part where it said SORRY but you can -Rep me all you like, ****.

I just try to do my hardest on making serious alts and get spammed with bad Rep's instead of C+C.

He gave you c&c and you rejected it.

[Chocobos]

That'd be because they are C+P

most of it is c+p, you've done a few houses and a big factory (a box)

not good imo:$

Wheres the C+C, basically he said "Its all C+P accept for a box, not good :$"

According to him, this is the equivilant of my alt:

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/5602/altjt8.png (http://imageshack.us)

a box, nobody sees it from my point of view and they think its C+C so -Rep me like oh 3 times now. hat trick.

[Kyle]

Wheres the C+C, basically he said "Its all C+P accept for a box, not good :$"

That means, do less c+p next time and more of your own drawings.......

[Chocobos]

Kyle no it doesnt, i feel disapointed with the Habbox alt community now.

[Everlong]

Wheres the C+C, basically he said "Its all C+P accept for a box, not good :$"

According to him, this is the equivilant of my alt:

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/5602/altjt8.png (http://imageshack.us)

a box, nobody sees it from my point of view and they think its C+C so -Rep me like oh 3 times now. hat trick.

Maybe he saw in to the future and was making the comment about this :P jk i wouldn't worry about just continue to make alts everyone gets a bit of c&c they dont like every now and again.

[Chocobos]

Seriously, i do not consider that C+C, it just insulted my alt.

Ill try better next time though, dispite that my Rep is now almost 0.

[Kyle]

Wheres the C+C, basically he said "Its all C+P accept for a box, not good :$"

According to him, this is the equivilant of my alt:

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/5602/altjt8.png (http://imageshack.us)

a box, nobody sees it from my point of view and they think its C+C so -Rep me like oh 3 times now. hat trick.
That's so untrue, there is no c+p on that image

[Chocobos]

w/e this isnt a discussion thread on a boxing match so back to topic lol.

[Chocobos]

Considering that this alt failed because of the C+P i am going to redo it with my own tree's, cars and other stuff.

:S

Edited by Elkaa (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not double post

[doggie]

dunt double post ok i luv u. anyways I am appauled that you jus admited ur alt is copypasta!!1 omg is delicious, yes?

[Moozo]

Seriously, i do not consider that C+C, it just insulted my alt.

Ill try better next time though, dispite that my Rep is now almost 0.
what do you expect?
youre not gonna get all amazing C+C and 10/10s all the time.

[Chocobos]

Yeah but i dont expect my rep to drop from 53 that far down from trying to pull an effort, ps. i don't even understand what an Infraction is properly.

working on making custom trees right now.

ps. an Infraction sounds like an awesome word.

[Everlong]

Yeah but i dont expect my rep to drop from 53 that far down from trying to pull an effort, ps. i don't even understand what an Infraction is properly.

working on making custom trees right now.

ps. an Infraction sounds like an awesome word.

Its all in the forum rules.

[Stickie]

hmmm chocobos... rly dude... you should build urself a bit stronger mentally and not even care what others say, ok? you just do your thing. if you like it it's good, but you cant expect everybody to like what you create. even picasso has some works that cant be sold or nobody wants. ok this is one of ur first alts and you might love it. but you wouldnt be posting it if you dont want comments from others and you wouldnt want them to lie about what they think of it do you? I think not, so you just accept what they say and say to yourself "hmm, he's got a point there, if I improved that, it realy would look a whole lot better" and you get over it and start remaking that alt or just improving it and along the way you'll find that you couldnt have done without all the negative response from all the people you might "hate" for their criticism cuz you improved so much. so get a grip and get over it and improve this alt or start working on ur next one if you want some nice comments on your very good alts (wich I'm sure are about to come, but it jsut takes some time). so i suggest you just improve this one because you got a pretty good base here, just chance the colours to a bit darker, put some windows in that giant cube, maybe put more buildings or a lawn 'or however u spell it) on the roof, even a tenniscourt or something for all I care, work a bit on the details and shading and post it again and u'll be amazed how much you've improved allready. just take your time with alts since it aint easy to do at the beginning (we all gotta learn) and dont post them once you think you got a pretty good alt, cuz everything can be done better. once you've succeeded with that. I hope you've matured a bit to take some honnest criticism and just swallow it. but dont put urself in defence mode. last thing I gotta say: rep on a forum on the internet isnt everything in life... I got 16 rep points since I've joined here, they hardly go up, but you wont see me care or make an effort to get them up.
now this is a long text but I do hope you read all this and get over it. good luck with all ur alts in the future and remember what I said. PLUR

[Chocobos]

Thats fine, its just he didnt give constructive critism as of such, he more of called my alt an orange box.

[stratosphere]

Put in a few slides (y'know the big tube ones that come out and go round in a circle then back in) lmao.

[Kyle]

Put in a few slides (y'know the big tube ones that come out and go round in a circle then back in) lmao.

I don't think it's supposed to be a waterpark...;)

[stratosphere]

I don't think it's supposed to be a waterpark...;)

Aww. Poo. :(

[Boonzeet]

Aww how funny. Chocobos disabled reputation haha...

[Chocobos]

because people kept spamming me with -Rep's although they we're mostly newbies with 1-2 Rep power like me.

[Boonzeet]

I pwnt you with 4.

[Moozo]

you only -rep half of your power anyway.

[Chocobos]

I've re-enabled my rep.

My goal is 75 Rep points, which could take a while depending on if my alts are good enough.

Does anyone know how to make boxs turn into photos with sketch and skrew?

I'd like to sketch and skrew a Picture but i cannot remember how.

Ps. i cannot spell sketch and skrew o.O

[jackass]

Don't really like it sorry.

Poor shading & its too big and plain really, its really just an orange box.

Oooh, and a lot of C&P.

5/10. Maybe 6/10.

[Chocobos]

Biogeneric, this is an old alt bud :)

"Check out [C] Building©"

It contains like no C+P exept for the trees which i made and just needed to C+P multiple times.