Chocobos Manor - New

[Chocobos]

This was done by scratch, no C+P so hopefully it will be better, im quite happy with how the trees turned out... look better than the ones on UK Hotel view.

http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/7372/newchocobosworldde8.png (http://imageshack.us)

Clouds and cars may look wonky but they are hard to do.

/10? and C&C.

[Boonzeet]

Uhm It's okay...

@ your signature:
You've said you gonna leave 2 times already. if you gonna leave, then get on with it.

[Chocobos]

Thanks i guess.:l

ps. last time i quitted habbox for 2 months atleast until my friend got me back into habbox by using the rare value site, and answer me why you closed your RPG already because lGoldBar has a 24 hour ban so i can't message you.

[Boonzeet]

Read your other thread. I said it there.

[Fly-boy]

No offence but your quite sad if your gonan leave over some little internet dispute.

[Elliott$]

Looks a bit plain tbh =[

+rep anyway

[Chocobos]

Fly-Boy i don't like being disliked by people, why be on a forum if your going to be disliked by everyone?

Anyway back on topic...

to the alt. xD

Elliot ty for the rep, your rep power is high because my rep shot up oO
ps. i posted on your minicity :] and ill try to make my alts less plain in future.

[Fly-boy]

the alt is good. but why is the helipad so good?

6/10

[brodeo]

It looks very similar to your first alt. And the trees and door in comparison to the cars are huge.

[Stickie]

this already looks a bit better, smaller building and at least got some windows in it. but look at the proportions tho (I think that's how u say it in english anyway) if your tree's that big then ur car gotta be that big and windows that big etc... to me, the windows look a bit too small, also if you want it more realistic I'd put in more windows, look at the original habbo hotel, how many windows are there? also if you want a helipad on the roof, make sure people can go on to the roof (add a lil building with door in it on roof). alsod you used bright colors again with the sky, it's a bit too bright imho. the grass looks better tho. I'd work on the cars and mainly on the building aswell, for the car, just look how a car looks like and make it as a square to start with, then if u like u can make the edges smoother. for the rest it's just pixel errors, like u accidently drew a line on the right side of the building in a lighter color. and the windows have a pixel error at the middle and on the left side of the building on the sidewalk. oh and also with the sidewalk, it isnt at the same lvl as the normal road so try highering the sidewalk with just a simple line. same for the thing on the roof btw. I'm not gonna rate you on your alts yet cuz you wouldnt like it, but build up from comment and also read my last post on ur other alt.

[Chocobos]

I wanted some bigger trees, however your right about the door.

Big glass door i guess oO

ok Stickie xD

I forgot to do the sidewalk proparly though it needs shading, the trees are suppost be old ones btw that are really big naturally, however i think ive done the door way too big... three cars high and a car wide.

Ps on my screen everything is dark, i mean really dark... i need to clean it because it makes it hard to do shading.

[doggie]

the building looks like square-shaped barf, the rest is nice. 7/10
+rep cuz i luv u <3333

[Chocobos]

:D thanks.

[Dalk]

Nice, its a lot better then the first one so +rep for improving, do what the others said ^ and everyone will love it!

[Kalk]

Nice, its a lot better then the first one so +rep for improving, do what the others said ^ and everyone will love it!

I agree with Jacob. I'm glad to see you've added some colour to the building, instead of that grey one.

Well done :)

[Everlong]

I think you need to go for a more difficult building shape, maybe have a look at a picture of a manor or mansion and try to copy its features.

[Chocobos]

I named it Chocobos Manor because i couldnt think of a name, alot of you are right though because the glass door is way too big and the pavement isnt shaded. oO

[Kyle]

This was done by scratch, no C+P so hopefully it will be better, im quite happy with how the trees turned out... look better than the ones on UK Hotel view.

http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/7372/newchocobosworldde8.png (http://imageshack.us)

Clouds and cars may look wonky but they are hard to do.

/10? and C&C.

you lied, you said there was no c+p, but you've just drawn 1 tree and c+p'ed it, and you've c+ped the wonky car... if it's called "chocobos world" should it not have a c ontop, if that's supposed to be a helepad, it's way too big, try making it smaller. ;) still too bright and not much texture, on bit on the sidewalk is not isometric

[Kardan]

Once again it's a bit too bright, but better colours than the last. Things are still out of proportion, ahd the tree trunks don't have good shading and aren't isometric. Very plain, and not all trees are the same size and grow in lines ;)

5/10.

[Chocobos]

Sorry, im still not quite good at shading yet and i need to take some tutorials.

I thought the Helipad was a little too big, but what if a Jumbojet landed there? ;o

ps. Kyle i dont understand what you mean, the Sidewalk looks istrometric to me but ill give it a zoom in and check.

Could you possibly explain in closer detail to me?

Im trying to get better.

also Kyle, i meant no C+P of things from hotel view, the trees we're created by me so its ok :D

Thanks for C+C, ill work on my alts more closely next time and ill take more time with the shading.

This alt took 30-50 minutes about.

[Dalk]

I know this post is a little late but i just noticed a bright orange line on the right side of the building, or is it just my screen :l

[Boonzeet]

I know this post is a little late but i just noticed a bright orange line on the right side of the building, or is it just my screen :l

That was his attempt at shine.

[Alan_Carr]

its alright for starters well done
7/10

[Kyle]

That was his attempt at shine.


pmsl :eusa_clap

[reindeer.]

looks better than first one.
cars a weird tho.
the building is still very plain though.

[Chocobos]

That was his attempt at shine.


No it wasnt, it was accidental and i didnt notice it to fix heh.

ps. this alt is oldddd >_>

[Dalk]

No it wasnt, it was accidental and i didnt notice it to fix heh.

ps. this alt is oldddd >_>

Its your newest one :l I dont see anything else coming from you?

[Chocobos]

achually there is a newer one but it fell down to page 2. :(

[MadFrankie2007]

It is very good as you did start from scratch.

8/10

Keep going!