View Full Version : [Alteration] Diner Complete
Everlong
22-12-2007, 07:08 PM
I remade my diner, i added shadows and improved the windows. i also changed the seat colours to red.
Tell me what you think of the windows, personally i think they look allot better than my first attempt.
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6743/completedinerredwp2.png
:Liam
22-12-2007, 07:09 PM
its nice :) Make the chairs a bit more shiney (introduce tones of white on rims ect.) to give it a more american feel.
pedz2221
22-12-2007, 07:11 PM
Wonderful, can see what you have changed/completed :P
would +REP but no point as i hav no rep power on this account.
Everlong
22-12-2007, 07:13 PM
its nice :) Make the chairs a bit more shiney (introduce tones of white on rims ect.) to give it a more american feel.
I don't really plan on changing anything else, but i see what you mean :)
Fly-boy
22-12-2007, 07:20 PM
Advice... Double yellow lines are only in England...
You have Fire Hydrants (American)
And a Diner (American)
But the alt itself is 10/10 +rep if i can
Stickie
22-12-2007, 07:33 PM
the windows have improved alot. good job on that! for the rest... yh maybe like some1 said earlier, make the seats shine a bit. also in my eyes, the barstools dont look right. in front it looks like the red pillow is higher then the stool itself, yet the back of it tells me otherwise... nonetheless I like this small cozy place. maybe the kitchen area looks a bit dull... here's some suggestions: add a microwave and/or a blender or something, put some milkshakes on the counter. also the cashregister (I think that's how it's called in english, the thing to put the money in anyway) could use some euhm... dividing inside to put the bills and coins in. and as another suggestion: you can add something on top wich allows the costumer on other side of the counter to know how much he gotta pay (I'm sorry, I dont know how to call it english but I think u'll understand, if not, I'll post a picture of what I mean)
Boonzeet
22-12-2007, 08:08 PM
Advice... Double yellow lines are only in England...
You have Fire Hydrants (American)
And a Diner (American)
Have you even VISITED america?
Don't Park on a DoubleLine - Don't Block the Box - New York Traffic Control.
Of course, I lived there. They do, beleive me...
jackass
22-12-2007, 10:08 PM
Love it.
You are yet another person to be pushed into my mind as skilled.
Well done. 9/10. :)
(Love the spray painted yellow lines!)
ItsDave
23-12-2007, 01:17 AM
Excellent, well done with the shadows. 10/10+rep
Everlong
23-12-2007, 01:13 PM
Excellent, well done with the shadows. 10/10+rep
thanks :) returned
Edit: need to spread -.-"
H-Design
23-12-2007, 02:16 PM
Looks good but I miss something :P 9/10
GlobalNews
23-12-2007, 02:42 PM
Put a microwave next to the cooker. I think there are to many lamp posts outside the window.
Maybe add afew people in the Diner. Staff/Customers
+Rep for the excelent Alt
Edit= Need to spread.
Stickie
23-12-2007, 04:09 PM
here's some suggestions: add a microwave and/or a blender or something, put some milkshakes on the counter.
Put a microwave next to the cooker. I think there are to many lamp posts outside the window.
Maybe add afew people in the Diner. Staff/Customers
+Rep for the excelent Alt
Edit= Need to spread.
staff + costumers sounds good tho
GlobalNews
23-12-2007, 04:11 PM
staff + costumers sounds good tho
Sorry never seen your post :rolleyes:
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