[WIP] Shop!

[MadFrankie2007]

I think myself it doesn't look habboish . . .
can you help with that?

thanks!

give ideas and advice

thanks!

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/7840/shopwt1.png

[Chocobos]

I find alts like these hard, but i'd:

Make the door bigger, it looks tiny.
On the bottom part of the windowcill make it a light grey.
Give the shop a different colour than white, maybe a very light grey?

Anyway it is nice, i like the colours inside the window because it looks transparent. 6/10

[Stickie]

yes make the blue thing at the window grey, but lighter then the left side if u want sunlight to be comming from the left, otherwise same color but looking at ur door I think it's comming from the left. I wouldnt make the window look like it's that deep into the wall. I'd make the door bigger aswell, like it's almost at top of entrance, so get rid of small green bar at top, put the sign higher etc... nice handle and sign on inside, but I'd put a handle on outside aswell or ppl will have probz to get in :p the windows r abit light imho, but that's ur choice, and the story is a bit empty aswell... also try to do the walls like chocobos said. you got a nice base to start from, so I suggest you work it out and show us the result :) nice start tho so I'll give you 5/10

[Alan_Carr]

stretch it out more, its like a piece of paper, make it wider
6/10