View Full Version : Part of the story im working on. :P
mrplahay
23-12-2007, 09:34 PM
I’m running. My chest is tight and sore. Breath rasping and whistling in my lungs. Branches whip against my face. Brambles tear at my legs and arms. There is a voice screaming. Out loud. The sound ripping through the trees, screaming and screaming.
Janet Snakehole
23-12-2007, 11:28 PM
Short but sweet I guess.
try and vary your punctuation; it'll add effect.
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