Song Lyrics

[zeJosh]

New song I wrote.
Too Many

(Slow Guitar strum)
My Shadow of grief...
Biting into me slowly, with gorged teeth,
My world is collapsing under my burdens,

(Drums kicks into rock with guitar)
Can't you see,
[Can't you see]
I Just want to be free
[Just be free]
My Life in shambles
[in shambles because of]
Because of you.

[Chorus]
Too many wishes
[With too many dreams]
Too many deals
[With too many seams]

My world is crashing down on me,
Can't you see.
[Just can't you see]

All because of my naivity
[Naivity go!]

[V2]

Hitting the ground around me.
There I fell. You can tell
I need your hand to help me up.
But no! You moved on, from me.
[From me]
Locking me away and throwing away the key!
[Throwing away, the key!]

[Chorus]

Too many wishes
[With too many dreams]
Too many deals
[with too many seams]

My world is crashing down on me,
Can't you see.
[Just can't you see]

All because of my naivity
[Naivity go!]

[V3]

Just pick me up,
Take me for a ride
[For a ride!]
Get me away,
Restore my pride!
[Restore my pride!]

[Chorus]
Too many wishes
[With too many dreams]
Too many deals
[with too many seams]

My world is crashing down on me,
Can't you see.
[Just can't you see]

Too Many Wishes,
Just too many wishes
Oh too many dreams

Too many deals,
Oh too many seams.[Listen to me!]
All I Need is your support,
I don't care with it's without a thought!
Just support my back, don't let me fall!
Be my awakening call!


Too many wishes
[With too many dreams]
Too many deals
[with too many seams]

(Repeat twice)

My world is crashing down on me,
Can't you see.
[Just can't you see]

(Fade out)

[Janet Snakehole]

Woww.
Sounds awesome.
:]

[Mitch4?]

sounds pretty darn amaazing. xxoxoxoxo

[zeJosh]

Thanks a bunch

[fweggy]

Sounds good but pretty depressing

Sure u dont wanna jump out of a window?

[zeJosh]

Meh, I based it around alt rock.
Would sound much better with a guitar to it.
But with the rock to it, wouldn't sound so depressing.

[Superman]

You should do recordings with these, difficult to get the tempo or beat as you probably intended otherwise

[zeJosh]

I would, but I can't play any music or sing. :'(

[MagicalPixie]

Wowww, pretty good lyrics

[John!]

Would be good in a death metal scream with cleam vocals for the parts in brackets and maybe part of the chorus.

[theJOSH]

Thanks. :D

[Invent]

Can't you see,
[Can't you see]
I Just want to be free
[Just be free]

That part reminds me of the song Running Away :P

[theJOSH]

That part reminds me of the song Running Away :P


Wrote this before I heard that song! XD

[Demetrius]

Brilliant lyrics :D

[theJOSH]

Thanks a lot :)